From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Sep 19 17:22:30 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5A6771065670; Wed, 19 Sep 2012 17:22:30 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::2c]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3AF7D8FC0A; Wed, 19 Sep 2012 17:22:30 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id q8JHMUcD033555; Wed, 19 Sep 2012 17:22:30 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id q8JHMU1S033552; Wed, 19 Sep 2012 17:22:30 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201209191722.q8JHMU1S033552@svn.freebsd.org> From: Warren Block Date: Wed, 19 Sep 2012 17:22:29 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Cc: Subject: svn commit: r39580 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 19 Sep 2012 17:22:30 -0000 Author: wblock Date: Wed Sep 19 17:22:29 2012 New Revision: 39580 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39580 Log: Add commas to "e.g." and "i.e." abbreviations. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml Wed Sep 19 16:59:39 2012 (r39579) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml Wed Sep 19 17:22:29 2012 (r39580) @@ -895,7 +895,7 @@ DOS2UNIX_REGEX= .*\.(c|cpp|h)The PORTREVISION variable is a monotonically increasing value which is reset to 0 with - every increase of PORTVERSION (i.e. + every increase of PORTVERSION (i.e., every time a new official vendor release is made), and appended to the package name if non-zero. Changes to PORTREVISION are used by automated @@ -3438,7 +3438,7 @@ ALWAYS_KEEP_DISTFILES= yes - Do not start with an indefinite article (i.e. + Do not start with an indefinite article (i.e., A or An); @@ -3448,7 +3448,7 @@ ALWAYS_KEEP_DISTFILES= yes - For lists of words use the Oxford comma (e.g. + For lists of words, use the Oxford comma (e.g., green, red, and blue); @@ -6938,13 +6938,13 @@ USE_QT4= moc_build qmake_build rcc_build JAVA_PORT - The name of the JDK port (e.g. + The name of the JDK port (e.g., 'java/openjdk6'). JAVA_PORT_VERSION - The full version of the JDK port (e.g. + The full version of the JDK port (e.g., '1.6.0'). If you only need the first two digits of this version number, use ${JAVA_PORT_VERSION:C/^([0-9])\.([0-9])(.*)$/\1.\2/}. @@ -6952,13 +6952,13 @@ USE_QT4= moc_build qmake_build rcc_build JAVA_PORT_OS - The operating system used by the JDK port (e.g. + The operating system used by the JDK port (e.g., 'native'). JAVA_PORT_VENDOR - The vendor of the JDK port (e.g. + The vendor of the JDK port (e.g., 'openjdk'). @@ -6971,7 +6971,7 @@ USE_QT4= moc_build qmake_build rcc_build JAVA_PORT_VENDOR_DESCRIPTION - Description of the vendor of the JDK port (e.g. + Description of the vendor of the JDK port (e.g., 'OpenJDK BSD Porting Team'). @@ -6979,20 +6979,20 @@ USE_QT4= moc_build qmake_build rcc_build JAVA_HOME Path to the installation directory of the JDK - (e.g. + (e.g., '/usr/local/openjdk6'). JAVAC - Path to the Java compiler to use (e.g. + Path to the Java compiler to use (e.g., '/usr/local/openjdk6/bin/javac'). JAR Path to the jar tool to use - (e.g. + (e.g., '/usr/local/openjdk6/bin/jar' or '/usr/local/bin/fastjar'). @@ -7001,14 +7001,14 @@ USE_QT4= moc_build qmake_build rcc_build APPLETVIEWER Path to the appletviewer - utility (e.g. + utility (e.g., '/usr/local/openjdk6/bin/appletviewer'). JAVA Path to the java executable. - Use this for executing Java programs (e.g. + Use this for executing Java programs (e.g., '/usr/local/openjdk6/bin/java'). @@ -10827,7 +10827,7 @@ as .putsy.conf and edit it.Xtensible, i.e., based on defining @@ -16336,7 +16336,7 @@ IGNORE= POINTYHAT is not supported Avoiding Linuxisms Do not use /proc if there are any - other ways of getting the information, e.g. + other ways of getting the information, e.g., setprogname(argv[0]) in main() and then &man.getprogname.3; if you want to know your name. @@ -16393,7 +16393,7 @@ IGNORE= POINTYHAT is not supported &os;. Check that headers are included in the - POSIX or man page recommended way, e.g. + POSIX or man page recommended way, e.g., sys/types.h is often forgotten, which is not as much of a problem for &linux; as it is for &os;.