Date: Tue, 9 Jul 2013 07:11:14 +0000 (UTC) From: Gabor Pali <pgj@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42204 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status Message-ID: <201307090711.r697BE6o090484@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: pgj Date: Tue Jul 9 07:11:14 2013 New Revision: 42204 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42204 Log: - Minor wording improvements for the ARM superpages report Submitted by: emaste, Zbyszek Bodek Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml Tue Jul 9 07:05:19 2013 (r42203) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml Tue Jul 9 07:11:14 2013 (r42204) @@ -658,11 +658,12 @@ </links> <body> - <p>The ARM architecture is more and more prevalent, not only in - the mobile and embedded space. Among the more interesting - industry trends emerging in the recent months, there has been - the concept of "ARM server". Some top-tier companies, e.g. - Dell and HP, have already started to develop such systems.</p> + <p>The ARM architecture is becoming more and more prevalent, with + increasing usage beyond the mobile and embedded space. Among + the more interesting industry trends emerging in the recent + months, there has been the concept of "ARM server". Some + top-tier companies, e.g. Dell and HP, have already started to + develop such systems.</p> <p>Key to success of &os; in these new areas is dealing with the sophisticated features of the platform, for example adding @@ -696,7 +697,7 @@ </ul> <p>This project is jointly sponsored by The &os; Foundation and - Semihalf sp.j.</p> + Semihalf.</p> </body> <help>
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