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>Number:         16000
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       changes for Introduction section of the Handbook
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          change-request
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Jan  8 21:40:00 PST 2000
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Joel Sutton
>Release:        FreeBSD 3.3-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
Busy Bee Consulting
>Environment:

FreeBSD stargate.home 3.3-RELEASE FreeBSD 3.3-RELEASE #0: Tue Dec 21 17:18:52 EST 1999     root@stargate.home:/usr/src/sys/compile/OFFICE  i386

>Description:

	The paragraph about the multi-user capabilities of FreeBSD didn't read
	very well. This patch makes my suggested changes.

	Perl isn't mentioned as one of the development tools. This patch
	also makes that change.

  Could someone please take a look at these small problems.  
	Thanks, Joel...

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:
	
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /usr/home/cvs/FreeBSD/doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.22
diff -u -r1.22 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	1999/12/04 06:19:12	1.22
+++ chapter.sgml	2000/01/07 04:11:25
@@ -37,8 +37,8 @@
       </listitem>
       
       <listitem>
-	<para><emphasis>Multiuser</emphasis> access means that many
-	  people can use a FreeBSD system simultaneously for a variety
+	<para><emphasis>Multiuser facilities</emphasis> which allow many
+	  people to use a FreeBSD system simultaneously for a variety
 	  of things.  This means, for example, that system peripherals
 	  such as printers and tape drives are properly shared between
 	  all users on the system or the network and that individual
@@ -108,8 +108,9 @@
       
       <listitem>
 	<para>A full complement of <emphasis>C</emphasis>,
-	  <emphasis>C++</emphasis> and <emphasis>Fortran</emphasis>
-	  development tools.  Many additional languages for advanced research
+	  <emphasis>C++</emphasis>, <emphasis>Fortran</emphasis>,
+	  and <emphasis>Perl</emphasis> development tools.
+          Many additional languages for advanced research
 	  and development are also available in the ports and packages
 	  collection.</para>
       </listitem>

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