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Subject: svn commit: r52736 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status
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Author: jrm (ports committer)
Date: Sat Dec 29 21:34:21 2018
New Revision: 52736
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/52736
Log:
  2018-01-2018-09 Report: Fix grammar issues and improve clarity
  
  Approved by:	bcr
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D18685
Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2018-01-2018-09.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2018-01-2018-09.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2018-01-2018-09.xml	Fri Dec 28 15:41:35 2018	(r52735)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2018-01-2018-09.xml	Sat Dec 29 21:34:21 2018	(r52736)
@@ -370,8 +370,8 @@
 
       1. Coordination between different groups to support the
 	upcoming 12.0 release. The timing of the OpenSSL
-	1.1.1 release posed challenges, the new OpenSSL
-	version included API changes, many components of
+	1.1.1 release posed challenges. The new OpenSSL
+	version included API changes, so many components of
 	the base system and ports required changes.
 	Staying with the older OpenSSL in 12.0 was not a
 	feasible option, because it would have meant
@@ -398,10 +398,9 @@
 	developer and user surveys. If there are questions
 	that you think should be added to the survey,
 	please discuss them on freebsd-arch@. We are
-	exploring ways for automated user-driven hardware
-	usage data to understand the changing ways our
-	software is used and to target better hardware
-	support.
+	also exploring ways to collect automated hardware-usage data.
+	This will help the project to understand the changing ways our
+	software is used and to improve hardware support.
 
       Here are other noteworthy events (in chronological order)
 	since the last quarterly report.