From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun May 4 02:58:53 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4AFE437B401; Sun, 4 May 2003 02:58:53 -0700 (PDT) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (repoman.freebsd.org [216.136.204.115]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id F0E3E43F75; Sun, 4 May 2003 02:58:52 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.12.6/8.12.6) with ESMTP id h449wq0U039390; Sun, 4 May 2003 02:58:52 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from murray@repoman.freebsd.org) Received: (from murray@localhost) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.12.6/8.12.6/Submit) id h449wqNq039389; Sun, 4 May 2003 02:58:52 -0700 (PDT) Message-Id: <200305040958.h449wqNq039389@repoman.freebsd.org> From: Murray Stokely Date: Sun, 4 May 2003 02:58:52 -0700 (PDT) To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org X-FreeBSD-CVS-Branch: HEAD Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks chapter.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 04 May 2003 09:58:53 -0000 murray 2003/05/04 02:58:52 PDT FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks chapter.sgml Log: More work on the new GBDE section: * Remove a comment encouraging someone to convert an xref to a ulink. * Simplify run-on sentence in introduction. * Use more descriptive DocBook tags. * Refer to our two versions of UFS as UFS1 and UFS2 rather than UFS and UFS2. (1) * Move an ephemeral URL from the main text to a footnote. * Note that newfs -O2 is the default for FreeBSD 5.1 and later (1). * Wordsmith (1, partially) PR: docs/51598 (1) Submitted by: bmah Revision Changes Path 1.152 +27 -29 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml