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Date: Thu, 21 Mar 2013 22:36:43 -0400
From: Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org>
To: Taras Korenko <ds@ukrhub.net>
Subject: Re: [patch] en/handbook/ports: a tiny cleanup
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On Thu, Mar 21, 2013 at 08:21:13PM +0200, Taras Korenko wrote:
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	2013-03-21 20:0=
7:53.000000000 +0200
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.up.xml	2013-03-21 2=
0:10:05.000000000 +0200
> @@ -204,7 +204,7 @@
>  	related to the application or install  <filename
>  	  role=3D"package">ports-mgmt/portaudit</filename>. Once
>  	installed, type <command>portaudit -F -a</command> to check
> -	all installed applications for known vulnerabilities</para>
> +	all installed applications for known vulnerabilities.</para>
>      </warning>
> =20
>      <para>The remainder of this chapter explains how to use packages
> @@ -279,7 +279,7 @@
>  	    <maketarget>search</maketarget>
>  	    name=3D<replaceable>program-name</replaceable></command>
>  	  where <replaceable>program-name</replaceable> is the name of
> -	  the software.  For example,to search for
> +	  the software.  For example, to search for
>  	  <command>lsof</command>:</para>
> =20
>  	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/ports</userinput>
> @@ -1784,9 +1784,7 @@
>        <para><filename
>  	  role=3D"package">ports-mgmt/pkg_cutleaves</filename> automates
>  	the task of removing installed ports that are no longer
> -	needed.
> -
> -	port.</para>
> +	needed.</para>
>      </sect2>
>    </sect1>
> =20

Looks good.  Please commit it.

Glen


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