From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Jul 9 07:11:15 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 125543D2; Tue, 9 Jul 2013 07:11:15 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from pgj@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 034B61C61; Tue, 9 Jul 2013 07:11:15 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id r697BE5k090485; Tue, 9 Jul 2013 07:11:14 GMT (envelope-from pgj@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from pgj@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.5/Submit) id r697BE6o090484; Tue, 9 Jul 2013 07:11:14 GMT (envelope-from pgj@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201307090711.r697BE6o090484@svn.freebsd.org> From: Gabor Pali Date: Tue, 9 Jul 2013 07:11:14 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42204 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 09 Jul 2013 07:11:15 -0000 Author: pgj Date: Tue Jul 9 07:11:14 2013 New Revision: 42204 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42204 Log: - Minor wording improvements for the ARM superpages report Submitted by: emaste, Zbyszek Bodek Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml Tue Jul 9 07:05:19 2013 (r42203) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml Tue Jul 9 07:11:14 2013 (r42204) @@ -658,11 +658,12 @@ -

The ARM architecture is more and more prevalent, not only in - the mobile and embedded space. Among the more interesting - industry trends emerging in the recent months, there has been - the concept of "ARM server". Some top-tier companies, e.g. - Dell and HP, have already started to develop such systems.

The ARM architecture is becoming more and more prevalent, with + increasing usage beyond the mobile and embedded space. Among + the more interesting industry trends emerging in the recent + months, there has been the concept of "ARM server". Some + top-tier companies, e.g. Dell and HP, have already started to + develop such systems.

Key to success of &os; in these new areas is dealing with the sophisticated features of the platform, for example adding @@ -696,7 +697,7 @@

This project is jointly sponsored by The &os; Foundation and - Semihalf sp.j.

+ Semihalf.