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Date:      Wed, 27 Feb 2013 20:32:01 -0700 (MST)
From:      Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
To:        Eitan Adler <eadler@freebsd.org>
Cc:        svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r41054 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge
Message-ID:  <alpine.BSF.2.00.1302272030210.59191@wonkity.com>
In-Reply-To: <CAF6rxgnourp%2Bqu8aAXrf6vjFua0Ls9LOov0Lqg3ojUFLQWa4Ug@mail.gmail.com>
References:  <201302272123.r1RLNwuA010231@svn.freebsd.org> <alpine.BSF.2.00.1302271528400.57262@wonkity.com> <CAF6rxgnourp%2Bqu8aAXrf6vjFua0Ls9LOov0Lqg3ojUFLQWa4Ug@mail.gmail.com>

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On Wed, 27 Feb 2013, Eitan Adler wrote:

> On 27 February 2013 17:36, Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com> wrote:
>> I would suggest just modifying the first sentence:
>>
>>   "Build a temporary set of directories into which the new
>>    <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and other files can be
>>    installed."
>
> I prefer a colon at the end, but patch sent to mentors.  Thanks!

I meant to leave the second sentence, which does end in a colon.  But 
now that you mention it, that second sentence is not really needed.



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