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Date:      Sat, 26 Nov 2011 16:38:49 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org>
To:        src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable-7@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r228001 - stable/7/etc
Message-ID:  <201111261638.pAQGcn3p000327@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: wblock (doc committer)
Date: Sat Nov 26 16:38:49 2011
New Revision: 228001
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/228001

Log:
  MFC r225861:
  
  Fix a confusing sentence.
  Other wording tweaks.
  
  Approved by:	gjb (mentor)

Modified:
  stable/7/etc/devd.conf
Directory Properties:
  stable/7/etc/   (props changed)

Modified: stable/7/etc/devd.conf
==============================================================================
--- stable/7/etc/devd.conf	Sat Nov 26 16:38:16 2011	(r228000)
+++ stable/7/etc/devd.conf	Sat Nov 26 16:38:49 2011	(r228001)
@@ -8,10 +8,10 @@
 # NB: device-name is shorthand for 'match device-name'
 
 options {
-	# Each directory directive adds a directory the list of directories
-	# that we scan for files.  Files are read-in in the order that they
-	# are returned from readdir(3).  The rule-sets are combined to
-	# create a DFA that's used to match events to actions.
+	# Each "directory" directive adds a directory to the list of
+	# directories that we scan for files.  Files are loaded in the order
+	# that they are returned from readdir(3).  The rule-sets are combined
+	# to create a DFA that's used to match events to actions.
 	directory "/etc/devd";
 	directory "/usr/local/etc/devd";
 	pid-file "/var/run/devd.pid";
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ notify 0 {
 };
 
 #
-# Try to start dhclient on Ethernet like interfaces when the link comes
+# Try to start dhclient on Ethernet-like interfaces when the link comes
 # up.  Only devices that are configured to support DHCP will actually
 # run it.  No link down rule exists because dhclient automatically exits
 # when the link goes down.
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ detach 100 {
 	device-name "ed50";
 };
 
-# When a USB Bluetooth dongle appears activate it
+# When a USB Bluetooth dongle appears, activate it
 attach 100 {
 	device-name "ubt[0-9]+";
 	action "/etc/rc.d/bluetooth quietstart $device-name";
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ attach 100 {
 };
 
 # Firmware download into the ActiveWire board. After the firmware download is
-# done the device detaches and reappears as something new and shiny
+# done, the device detaches and reappears as something new and shiny
 # automatically.
 attach 100 {
 	match "vendor"	"0x0854";
@@ -276,12 +276,11 @@ notify 0 {
 
 /* EXAMPLES TO END OF FILE
 
-# The following might be an example of something that a vendor might
-# install if you were to add their device.  This might reside in
-# /usr/local/etc/devd/deqna.conf.  A deqna is, in this hypothetical
-# example, a pccard ethernet-like device.  Students of history may
-# know other devices by this name, and will get the in-jokes in this
-# entry.
+# An example of something that a vendor might install if you were to
+# add their device.  This might reside in /usr/local/etc/devd/deqna.conf.
+# A deqna is, in this hypothetical example, a pccard ethernet-like device.
+# Students of history may know other devices by this name, and will get
+# the in-jokes in this entry.
 nomatch 10 {
 	match "bus" "pccard[0-9]+";
 	match "manufacturer" "0x1234";
@@ -299,7 +298,7 @@ detach 10 {
 
 # Examples of notify hooks.  A notify is a generic way for a kernel
 # subsystem to send event notification to userland.
-#
+
 # Here are some examples of ACPI notify handlers.  ACPI subsystems that
 # generate notifies include the AC adapter, power/sleep buttons,
 # control method batteries, lid switch, and thermal zones.



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