From nobody Thu Aug 28 17:09:45 2025 X-Original-To: dev-commits-doc-all@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4cCSZ13Jclz66KXm for ; Thu, 28 Aug 2025 17:09:45 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from git@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "R12" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4cCSZ11CTXz3Nv9; Thu, 28 Aug 2025 17:09:45 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from git@FreeBSD.org) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1756400985; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding; bh=tZXQDqBWE4qVgfMnhMyX3E7ftD2/mAPCcp3iTfjyEb8=; b=MKcaciKXqhUuQk6TT1AvVPHepI4GhXrO3CypGuVkx9AMbuVuLI0ZnnsKGUYeYDCWLfAIBY MsKgM5bvg57SDPdmLjxUADP4fA58FVlbM6wQFr008XEBFSLI0V/pUpQUARmYoxx7tnKncB 8f7VplwK+xFwU0FpdlFK0hPesOWdzO7AMh21MNFNMrp03HsRgvyfgJTioSAJyIzRvI5yh1 gj8UG1j3TeQfJOzmVi3P6RDYWVwQoSetvHqhsk6uBJaxxC8adY930dgPT38XbRm5Zhgohc DHYGBGRd8k5OWdzCbd1Y9Q/BidhWVn4rQTYZ2LH1CSlxphC03N5pVVojPAGmBg== ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1756400985; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding; bh=tZXQDqBWE4qVgfMnhMyX3E7ftD2/mAPCcp3iTfjyEb8=; b=gPlvZZ1T/gWC2UtJEBpnd9OwEm8TEKNUUoj+VIIcedsSKoARpO7h331JWbJe4OMz++lkKq +q9JvobCdKN3dl0JzYeIOMmEckQpDnbyYNTirUP8QB0m+F8cJCNYYyhmKBNUunEOonVi4g lLZXoB9NA0GIOc/Pag1mfea5YDCnexBABKLal5hLFp1V1s1oEcV4zTsaQ1pEd6xe19317Y PcKwG0G+4kSya/xy1M+VsqXj5hQXL8Jhn6TLX4HiZfR7oCIju5YDbCvh46iNdJwDdXCSH8 RCYKfc1596yzNG7KyvBTXdEiXVhrrNPCXd6mnML8CQ5R4VwxKIW5LzWEZQgDNw== ARC-Seal: i=1; s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1756400985; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=Mc1dNJzx9AqDf1Ss0InL9fSQltZHtlQ8BgRiX1JQY/SlN4qXcC67q4BfAwwRaCCfVnNAE9 +D+uI/A2P/IS7KpYdJGoZcuqR3JVSvVhEUL/hEK0sPa574zP0WZX/8B2Kj+YxDs+2IIrvl VQyHLPbqRJboa4zFN/J4u4WOzQGaamTFcDnBaZH/Oz3midVd1Mh/Wd9csXClgNnZXjuhRb fqz4v6wgikn605VPi+pWIwHcbgtRodJrRa5lXbdAT6CvHOzoaB+X3mNLT7MdZLU4w3mpl+ nPP/07aTQbMnbCqLaPcfbAom3rKn9FBAUbXt1jBU3D3XCYkkAaNDlP+BD6zg1g== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none Received: from gitrepo.freebsd.org (gitrepo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:5]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4cCSZ10q1hz1HMk; Thu, 28 Aug 2025 17:09:45 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from git@FreeBSD.org) Received: from gitrepo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.44]) by gitrepo.freebsd.org (8.18.1/8.18.1) with ESMTP id 57SH9jnV003425; Thu, 28 Aug 2025 17:09:45 GMT (envelope-from git@gitrepo.freebsd.org) Received: (from git@localhost) by gitrepo.freebsd.org (8.18.1/8.18.1/Submit) id 57SH9jr5003422; Thu, 28 Aug 2025 17:09:45 GMT (envelope-from git) Date: Thu, 28 Aug 2025 17:09:45 GMT Message-Id: <202508281709.57SH9jr5003422@gitrepo.freebsd.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-doc-all@FreeBSD.org From: Benedict Reuschling Subject: git: b65c5744af - main - Avoid the use of "you" in the network-servers chapter List-Id: Commit messages for all branches of the doc repository List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/dev-commits-doc-all List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-BeenThere: dev-commits-doc-all@freebsd.org Sender: owner-dev-commits-doc-all@FreeBSD.org MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Git-Committer: bcr X-Git-Repository: doc X-Git-Refname: refs/heads/main X-Git-Reftype: branch X-Git-Commit: b65c5744af0dc93c547c59bf7ec56ba6b198ec77 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated The branch main has been updated by bcr: URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=b65c5744af0dc93c547c59bf7ec56ba6b198ec77 commit b65c5744af0dc93c547c59bf7ec56ba6b198ec77 Author: Benedict Reuschling AuthorDate: 2025-08-28 15:28:39 +0000 Commit: Benedict Reuschling CommitDate: 2025-08-28 17:09:14 +0000 Avoid the use of "you" in the network-servers chapter Rewrite sentences that contain 'you', which should be avoided according to the FDP Primer. The resulting sentences are easier to understand and often shorter. I did not change programlistings and other output as these are from programs, which need to be changed first (out of scope of this change). Event: Oslo Hackathon 2025 Approved by: carlavilla Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D52213 --- .../content/en/books/handbook/network-servers/_index.adoc | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/network-servers/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/network-servers/_index.adoc index 37109cb947..d7ac579d4f 100644 --- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/network-servers/_index.adoc +++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/network-servers/_index.adoc @@ -96,14 +96,14 @@ Each line of this configuration file represents an application which can be star By default, every line starts with a comment (`+#+`), meaning that inetd is not listening for any applications. To configure inetd to listen for an application's connections, remove the `+#+` at the beginning of the line for that application. -After saving your edits, configure inetd to start at system boot by editing [.filename]#/etc/rc.conf#: +After saving the edits, configure inetd to start at system boot by editing [.filename]#/etc/rc.conf#: [.programlisting] .... inetd_enable="YES" .... -To start inetd now, so that it listens for the service you configured, type: +To start inetd now, so that it listens for the configured service, type: [source,shell] .... @@ -1249,7 +1249,7 @@ default:\ In this example, the system is using the DES format for password hashing. Other possible values include `blf` for Blowfish, `md5` for MD5, `sha256` and `sha512` for SHA-256 and SHA-512 respectively. -For more information and the up to date list of what is available on your system, consult the man:crypt[3] manpage. +For more information and the up to date list of what is available on the system, consult the man:crypt[3] manpage. If the format on a host needs to be edited to match the one being used in the NIS domain, the login capability database must be rebuilt after saving the change: @@ -2618,7 +2618,7 @@ On FreeBSD, the built-in ntpd can be used to synchronize a system's clock. ntpd is configured using man:rc.conf[5] variables and [.filename]#/etc/ntp.conf#, as detailed in the following sections. ntpd communicates with its network peers using UDP packets. -Any firewalls between your machine and its NTP peers must be configured to allow UDP packets in and out on port 123. +Any firewalls between the machine and its NTP peers must be configured to allow UDP packets in and out on port 123. ==== The [.filename]#/etc/ntp.conf# file @@ -2732,7 +2732,7 @@ The presence of any of the following keywords in [.filename]#ntp.conf# requires * logdir * statsdir -To manually configure ntpd to run as user `ntpd` you must: +To manually configure ntpd to run as user `ntpd`: * Ensure that the `ntpd` user has access to all the files and directories specified in the configuration. * Arrange for the `mac_ntpd` module to be loaded or compiled into the kernel. See man:mac_ntpd[4] for details.