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From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
To: Eitan Adler <eadler@freebsd.org>
Subject: Re: svn commit: r41054 -
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On Wed, 27 Feb 2013, Eitan Adler wrote:

> On 27 February 2013 17:36, Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com> wrote:
>> I would suggest just modifying the first sentence:
>>
>>   "Build a temporary set of directories into which the new
>>    <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and other files can be
>>    installed."
>
> I prefer a colon at the end, but patch sent to mentors.  Thanks!

I meant to leave the second sentence, which does end in a colon.  But 
now that you mention it, that second sentence is not really needed.