From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Feb 4 10:24:59 2014 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 1A6CB359 for ; Tue, 4 Feb 2014 10:24:59 +0000 (UTC) Received: from boomer.ukrhub.net (boomer.ukrhub.net [94.125.121.14]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 523FF1AE7 for ; Tue, 4 Feb 2014 10:24:57 +0000 (UTC) Received: by boomer.ukrhub.net (Postfix, from userid 58) id A0D2224DC66; Tue, 4 Feb 2014 12:16:06 +0200 (EET) X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.3.1 (2010-03-16) on boomer.ukrhub.net X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.9 required=5.0 tests=ALL_TRUSTED,BAYES_00 autolearn=ham version=3.3.1 Received: from gamma.ukrhub.net (unknown [10.100.1.91]) by boomer.ukrhub.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5F19024DC61 for ; Tue, 4 Feb 2014 12:16:04 +0200 (EET) Received: from gamma.ukrhub.net (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by gamma.ukrhub.net (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id s14AG4Al085062 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=NO) for ; Tue, 4 Feb 2014 12:16:04 +0200 (EET) (envelope-from ds@ukrhub.net) Received: (from ds@localhost) by gamma.ukrhub.net (8.14.7/8.14.7/Submit) id s14AG4Si085061 for freebsd-doc@freebsd.org; Tue, 4 Feb 2014 12:16:04 +0200 (EET) (envelope-from ds@ukrhub.net) Date: Tue, 4 Feb 2014 12:16:04 +0200 From: Taras Korenko To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: en/handbook/kernelconfig: proposed corrections Message-ID: <20140204101604.GC83803@gamma.ukrhub.net> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="NzB8fVQJ5HfG6fxh" Content-Disposition: inline User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.22 (2013-10-16) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list Reply-To: Taras Korenko List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 04 Feb 2014 10:24:59 -0000 --NzB8fVQJ5HfG6fxh Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Good morning, doc@ folks. The following notes were made while working on russian translation of kernelconfig chapter. I hope some parts of the following diff might be useful. So, could anyone review that diff? -- WBR, Taras Korenko --NzB8fVQJ5HfG6fxh Content-Type: text/x-diff; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="00.en.hb.kc.diff" Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.xml =================================================================== --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.xml (revision 43745) +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.xml (working copy) @@ -204,8 +204,8 @@ &man.pciconf.8;, which provides more verbose output. For example: - pciconf -lv - ath0@pci0:3:0:0: class=0x020000 card=0x058a1014 chip=0x1014168c rev=0x01 hdr=0x00 + &prompt.user; pciconf -lv +ath0@pci0:3:0:0: class=0x020000 card=0x058a1014 chip=0x1014168c rev=0x01 hdr=0x00 vendor = 'Atheros Communications Inc.' device = 'AR5212 Atheros AR5212 802.11abg wireless' class = network @@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ ath_hal(4) - Atheros Hardware Access Layer (HAL) Once the hardware inventory list is created, refer to it - to ensure that installed hardware is not removed as you edit the custom + to ensure that drivers for installed hardware are not removed as you edit the custom kernel configuration file. @@ -250,11 +250,7 @@ If /usr/src/ does not exist or it is empty, source has not been installed. Source can be installed using - svn, which is described in , or by installing the - src distribution using &man.sysinstall.8;. This - distribution can be selected by navigating to the - Configuration and then to the - Distributions menu within &man.sysinstall.8;. + svn, which is described in . Once source is installed, review the contents of /usr/src/sys. This directory contains a number of subdirectories, including those which represent the following @@ -350,7 +346,7 @@ To build a file which contains all available options, run the following command as root: - &prompt.root; cd /usr/src/sys/i386/conf && make LINT + &prompt.root; cd /usr/src/sys/arch/conf && make LINT @@ -521,10 +517,10 @@ options SCSI_DELAY=5000 # Delay (in ms) before probing SCSI This causes the kernel to pause for 5 seconds before probing - each SCSI device in the system. If the system only has IDE hard - drives, ignore this or lower the number to speed up booting. - However, if &os; has trouble recognizing the SCSI devices, the - number will have to be raised again. + each SCSI device in the system. If &os; has trouble recognizing + the SCSI devices, the number will have to be raised. On the + other hand, if the system has only IDE hard drives, ignore this + or lower the number to speed up booting. options KTRACE # ktrace(1) support @@ -577,7 +573,7 @@ processors. - This device exists only on the i386 architecture and this + This device exists only on the &i386; architecture and this configuration line should not be used on other architectures. @@ -743,8 +739,7 @@ The &man.vga.4; video card driver. - -device splash # Splash screen and screen saver support + device splash # Splash screen and screen saver support Required by the boot splash screen and screen savers. @@ -926,7 +921,7 @@ #device le ISA Ethernet drivers. See - /usr/src/sys/i386/conf/NOTES + /usr/src/sys/arch/conf/NOTES for details of which cards are supported by which driver. # Wireless NIC cards @@ -1065,7 +1060,7 @@ For more information and additional devices supported by &os;, see - /usr/src/sys/i386/conf/NOTES. + /usr/src/sys/arch/conf/NOTES. Large Memory Configurations --NzB8fVQJ5HfG6fxh--