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Date:      Tue, 16 Feb 2021 15:39:55 +0100
From:      Sergio Carlavilla <carlavilla@freebsd.org>
To:        Daniel Ebdrup Jensen <debdrup@freebsd.org>, freebsd-doc@freebsd.org,  Marc Fonvieille <blackend@freebsd.org>
Subject:   Re: Regarding AsciiDoctor and long lines
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On Tue, 16 Feb 2021 at 15:16, Daniel Ebdrup Jensen <debdrup@freebsd.org> wr=
ote:
>
> On Tue, Feb 16, 2021 at 01:01:45PM +0000, Ceri Davies wrote:
> >On Tue, 16 Feb 2021 at 07:48, Daniel Ebdrup Jensen <debdrup@freebsd.org>
> >wrote:
> >
> >> On Mon, Feb 15, 2021 at 07:05:09PM +0100, Marc Fonvieille wrote:
> >> >Le 12.02.2021 18:24, Sergio Carlavilla a =C3=A9crit :
> >> >>
> >> >> I think the doceng team should pronounce about this.
> >> >>
> >> >> IMHO, use the 72 characters per line would be a problem in the futu=
re.
> >> >>
> >> >
> >> >Why it would be a problem?
> >> >
> >> >--
> >> >Marc
> >>
> >> Hi folks,
> >>
> >> Can we make a compromise where real paragraphs, ie. the only things
> >> which don't seem to need much in the way of AsciiDoctor markup, are ke=
pt
> >> at 72 columns, and headings, lists, images, include macros, variables
> >> and custom macros are allowed to go beyond the 72 columns?
> >> If they have to, there's always word-smithing options for trying to be
> >> as concise as possible (without, of course, making things too obtuse -
> >> it's a tough balance, admittedly?
> >>
> >> That seemed to work for DocBook, so is there a reason it won't work
> >> here?
> >>
> >
> >  For HTML output it doesn't look like it's an issue; although whitespac=
e
> >is preserved in the output, it's luckily irrelevant to HTML output.
> >
> >For other output formats such as PDF or mdoc then I can see that it is
> >problematic to hard wrap text but that suggests that there's a tooling
> >issue; Marc's need to be able to actually see what has changed is really
> >important.
> >
> >Butting out for another 9 years now :D
> >
> >Ceri
>
> I don't see how mdoc would be impacted, since that lives in the src
> repo.
>
> As for pdf files, I couldn't tell you the last time I used the handbook
> in a pdf format, so I had to generate it by grabbing asciidoctor-pdf
> and running it on doc/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/book.adoc -
> and it produced [1].
>
> Aside from things which I think can be addressed separately, the change
> I made in order to test the theories that pdf should work with extra
> linebreaks inserted at 72 columns, is on page 21, on the paragraph
> "The hardware requirements to install FreeBSD vary by.."
>
> To me, this looks exactly like how I would expect it to look.
> So I think we'll be fine with this change, at least for newlines as it
> relates to paragraphs.
>
> Yours,
> Daniel Ebdrup Jensen
>
> [1]: https://people.freebsd.org/~debdrup/book.pdf

Hi,

I think that I did not explain my position correctly hehehe.

What we have *right now* it's the result of a mechanical conversion.
What we have right now *it's not* the "one sentence per line" that the
AsciiDoctor team recommends. What we have right now it's the result
of converting Docbook to AsciiDoc automatically.

So for example, is we took for example this paragraph from[1]:

[[desktop-productivity]]
=3D=3D Productivity

When it comes to productivity, users often look for an office suite or
an easy-to-use word processor. While some <<x11-wm,desktop
environments>> like KDE provide an office suite, there is no default
productivity package. Several office suites and graphical word
processors are available for FreeBSD, regardless of the installed
window manager.

Using the one sentence per line would be:

[[desktop-productivity]]
=3D=3D Productivity

When it comes to productivity, users often look for an office suite or
an easy-to-use word processor. (new line)
While some <<x11-wm,desktop environments>> like KDE provide an office
suite, there is no default productivity package. (new line)
Several office suites and graphical word processors are available for
FreeBSD, regardless of the installed window manager. (new line)

I don't see the problem of using this approach.

But I see a lot of problems using the 72 line approach.

What problems?
- Headings, unordered list, ordered list, qandas, tables and a long etc...
- Another problem? Right now the paragraphs work as you expected
  with the 72 characters per line, but what gonna happen if the AsciiDoctor
  team changes this in the future? How is going to assume the responsibilit=
y
  of changing everything to fit the new requirements?
  The good point of this is that AsciiDoctor is under heavy development.

And of course, I'm not saying that the current behaviour with the
diff's are correct.
I know that right now it's *****very***** difficult to read the diffs.

For example, you can read an example of the "one sentence per line" here[2]=
.
I think here[2] you can see very clear the "one sentence per line" approach=
.

IMHO, the other approach returns to the "Docbook approach".

Bye.

[1] https://raw.githubusercontent.com/freebsd/freebsd-doc/main/documentatio=
n/content/en/books/handbook/desktop/_index.adoc
[2] https://raw.githubusercontent.com/freebsd/freebsd-quarterly/master/repo=
rt-sample.adoc



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