From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Aug 24 21:20:17 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 69C9C16A523 for ; Tue, 24 Aug 2004 21:20:17 +0000 (GMT) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 99CCA43D41 for ; Tue, 24 Aug 2004 21:20:15 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.11/8.12.11) with ESMTP id i7OLKFIW073294 for ; Tue, 24 Aug 2004 21:20:15 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.11/8.12.11/Submit) id i7OLKFxJ073293; Tue, 24 Aug 2004 21:20:15 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Tue, 24 Aug 2004 21:20:15 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200408242120.i7OLKFxJ073293@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, "Jesus R.Camou" Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8E77716A4CE for ; Tue, 24 Aug 2004 21:13:22 +0000 (GMT) Received: from fed1rmmtao04.cox.net (fed1rmmtao04.cox.net [68.230.241.35]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4DAF043D45 for ; Tue, 24 Aug 2004 21:13:22 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from jcamou@cox.net) Received: from nightfall.cox.net ([68.0.135.88]) by fed1rmmtao04.cox.net (InterMail vM.6.01.03.02.01 201-2131-111-104-103-20040709) with ESMTP id <20040824211320.KRBN21027.fed1rmmtao04.cox.net@nightfall.cox.net> for ; Tue, 24 Aug 2004 17:13:20 -0400 Received: by nightfall.cox.net (Postfix, from userid 1002) id 797F346; Tue, 24 Aug 2004 13:13:33 -0700 (MST) Message-Id: <20040824201333.797F346@nightfall.cox.net> Date: Tue, 24 Aug 2004 13:13:33 -0700 (MST) From: "Jesus R.Camou" To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Subject: docs/70920: [PATCH] fix couple typos && s/words/entities (handbook preface) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list Reply-To: "Jesus R.Camou" List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 24 Aug 2004 21:20:17 -0000 >Number: 70920 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [PATCH] fix couple typos && s/words/entities (handbook preface) >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: medium >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: update >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Tue Aug 24 21:20:15 GMT 2004 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Jesus R. Camou >Release: FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD nightfall.cox.net 4.10-STABLE FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE #11: Mon Jul 26 20:10:25 MST 2004 root@nightfall.cox.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/NIGHTFALL i386 >Description: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml: Fix typos: o travelled -> traveled o Alt,and -> Alt, and While in here, use entities for: o FreeBSD (&os;) o FreeBSD-STABLE (&os.stable;) o FreeBSD-CURRENT (&os.current;) o Linux (&linux;) >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: --- preface.diff begins here --- Index: preface.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.23 diff -u -r1.23 preface.sgml --- preface.sgml 1 Aug 2004 05:48:15 -0000 1.23 +++ preface.sgml 24 Aug 2004 20:59:56 -0000 @@ -8,16 +8,16 @@ Intended Audience - The FreeBSD newcomer will find that the first section of this - book guides the user through the FreeBSD installation process and + The &os; newcomer will find that the first section of this + book guides the user through the &os; installation process and gently introduces the concepts and conventions that underpin &unix;. Working through this section requires little more than the desire to explore, and the ability to take on board new concepts as they are introduced. - Once you have travelled this far, the second, far larger, + Once you have traveled this far, the second, far larger, section of the Handbook is a comprehensive reference to all manner - of topics of interest to FreeBSD system administrators. Some of + of topics of interest to &os; system administrators. Some of these chapters may recommend that you do some prior reading, and this is noted in the synopsis at the beginning of each chapter. @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ Second Edition This third edition is the culmination of over two years of - work by the dedicated members of the FreeBSD Documentation + work by the dedicated members of the &os; Documentation Project. The following are the major changes in this new edition: @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ , Mandatory Access Control (MAC), is a new chapter with this edition. It explains what MAC is - and how this mechanism can be used to secure a FreeBSD + and how this mechanism can be used to secure a &os; system. @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ , Advanced Networking, has been expanded with new information about - using Bluetooth devices with FreeBSD, setting up wireless + using Bluetooth devices with &os;, setting up wireless networks, and Asynchronous Transfer Mode (ATM) networking. @@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ First Edition The second edition was the culmination of over two years of - work by the dedicated members of the FreeBSD Documentation + work by the dedicated members of the &os; Documentation Project. The following were the major changes in this edition: @@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ Appendices. - (Installing FreeBSD) was completely + (Installing &os;) was completely rewritten with many screenshots to make it much easier for new users to grasp the text. @@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ technologies such as KDE and GNOME on &xfree86; 4.X. - (The FreeBSD Booting Process) has been + (The &os; Booting Process) has been expanded. @@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ (Serial Communications) has been completely - reorganized and updated for FreeBSD 4.X/5.X. + reorganized and updated for &os; 4.X/5.X. (PPP and SLIP) has been substantially @@ -211,11 +211,11 @@ This book is split into five logically distinct sections. The first section, Getting Started, covers - the installation and basic usage of FreeBSD. It is expected that + the installation and basic usage of &os;. It is expected that the reader will follow these chapters in sequence, possibly skipping chapters covering familiar topics. The second section, Common Tasks, covers some frequently used - features of FreeBSD. This section, and all subsequent sections, + features of &os;. This section, and all subsequent sections, can be read out of order. Each chapter begins with a succinct synopsis that describes what the chapter covers and what the reader is expected @@ -234,8 +234,8 @@ , Introduction - Introduces FreeBSD to a new user. It describes the - history of the FreeBSD Project, its goals and development model. + Introduces &os; to a new user. It describes the + history of the &os; Project, its goals and development model. @@ -250,7 +250,7 @@ , &unix; Basics Covers the basic commands and functionality of the - FreeBSD operating system. If you are familiar with Linux or + &os; operating system. If you are familiar with Linux or another flavor of &unix; then you can probably skip this chapter. @@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ , Installing Applications Covers the installation of third-party software with - both FreeBSD's innovative Ports Collection and standard + both &os;'s innovative Ports Collection and standard binary packages. @@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ , The X Window System Describes the X Window System in general and using - &xfree86; on FreeBSD in particular. Also describes common + &xfree86; on &os; in particular. Also describes common desktop environments such as KDE and GNOME. @@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ Lists some common desktop applications, such as web browsers and productivity suites, and describes how to install them on - FreeBSD. + &os;. @@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ - , Configuring the FreeBSD + , Configuring the &os; Kernel Explains why you might need to configure a new kernel @@ -301,7 +301,7 @@ , Printing - Describes managing printers on FreeBSD, including + Describes managing printers on &os;, including information about banner pages, printer accounting, and initial setup. @@ -309,9 +309,9 @@ , Linux Binary Compatibility - Describes the Linux compatibility features of FreeBSD. + Describes the Linux compatibility features of &os;. Also provides detailed installation instructions for many - popular Linux applications such as &oracle;, &sap.r3;, and + popular &linux; applications such as &oracle;, &sap.r3;, and &mathematica;. @@ -322,15 +322,15 @@ , Configuration and Tuning Describes the parameters available for system - administrators to tune a FreeBSD system for optimum + administrators to tune a &os; system for optimum performance. Also describes the various configuration files - used in FreeBSD and where to find them. + used in &os; and where to find them. , Booting Process - Describes the FreeBSD boot process and explains + Describes the &os; boot process and explains how to control this process with configuration options. @@ -347,7 +347,7 @@ , Security Describes many different tools available to help keep your - FreeBSD system secure, including Kerberos, IPsec, OpenSSH, and + &os; system secure, including Kerberos, IPsec, OpenSSH, and network firewalls. @@ -355,14 +355,14 @@ , Mandatory Access Control Explains what Mandatory Access Control (MAC) is and how this - mechanism can be used to secure a FreeBSD system. + mechanism can be used to secure a &os; system. , Storage Describes how to manage storage media and filesystems - with FreeBSD. This includes physical disks, RAID arrays, + with &os;. This includes physical disks, RAID arrays, optical and tape media, memory-backed disks, and network filesystems. @@ -378,7 +378,7 @@ , Localization - Describes how to use FreeBSD in languages other than + Describes how to use &os; in languages other than English. Covers both system and application level localization. @@ -386,8 +386,8 @@ , The Cutting Edge - Explains the differences between FreeBSD-STABLE, - FreeBSD-CURRENT, and FreeBSD releases. Describes which users + Explains the differences between &os.stable;, + &os.current;, and &os; releases. Describes which users would benefit from tracking a development system and outlines that process. @@ -399,14 +399,14 @@ , Serial Communications Explains how to connect terminals and modems to your - FreeBSD system for both dial in and dial out connections. + &os; system for both dial in and dial out connections. , PPP and SLIP Describes how to use PPP, SLIP, or PPP over Ethernet to - connect to remote systems with FreeBSD. + connect to remote systems with &os;. @@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ , Network Servers Provides detailed instructions and example configuration - files to set up your FreeBSD machine as a network filesystem + files to set up your &os; machine as a network filesystem server, domain name server, network information system server, or time synchronization server. @@ -440,11 +440,11 @@ - , Obtaining FreeBSD + , Obtaining &os; - Lists different sources for obtaining FreeBSD media on CDROM + Lists different sources for obtaining &os; media on CDROM or DVD as well as different sites on the Internet that allow - you to download and install FreeBSD. + you to download and install &os;. @@ -459,15 +459,15 @@ , Resources on the Internet - Describes the many forums available for FreeBSD users to + Describes the many forums available for &os; users to post questions and engage in technical conversations about - FreeBSD. + &os;. , PGP Keys - Lists the PGP fingerprints of several FreeBSD Developers. + Lists the PGP fingerprints of several &os; Developers. @@ -525,7 +525,7 @@ Meaning the user should type the Ctrl, - Alt,and Del keys at the same + Alt, and Del keys at the same time. Keys that are meant to be typed in sequence will be separated with @@ -559,7 +559,7 @@ E:\> tools\fdimage floppies\kern.flp A: Examples starting with &prompt.root; indicate a command that - must be invoked as the superuser in FreeBSD. You can login as + must be invoked as the superuser in &os;. You can login as root to type the command, or login as your normal account and use &man.su.1; to gain superuser privileges. @@ -585,7 +585,7 @@ document by paying authors to work on it full-time, paying for publication, etc. In particular, BSDi (subsequently acquired by Wind River Systems) - paid members of the FreeBSD Documentation Project to work on + paid members of the &os; Documentation Project to work on improving this book full time leading up to the publication of the first printed edition in March 2000 (ISBN 1-57176-241-8). Wind River Systems then paid several additional authors to make a --- preface.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: