From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Oct 6 18:23:50 2005 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id CAB7316A41F for ; Thu, 6 Oct 2005 18:23:50 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from garys@opusnet.com) Received: from opusnet.com (mail.opusnet.com [209.210.200.6]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 59BCC43D45 for ; Thu, 6 Oct 2005 18:23:50 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from garys@opusnet.com) Received: from localhost.localhost [70.98.246.232] by opusnet.com with ESMTP (SMTPD32-8.05) id ABB049080102; Thu, 06 Oct 2005 11:23:44 -0700 Received: from localhost.localhost (localhost.localhost [127.0.0.1]) by localhost.localhost (8.13.3/8.13.3) with ESMTP id j96IROGw016218 for ; Thu, 6 Oct 2005 11:27:25 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from garys@opusnet.com) Received: (from jojo@localhost) by localhost.localhost (8.13.3/8.13.3/Submit) id j96IRJYF016217; Thu, 6 Oct 2005 11:27:19 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from garys@opusnet.com) To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org From: garys@opusnet.com (Gary W. Swearingen) Date: Thu, 06 Oct 2005 11:27:19 -0700 Message-ID: User-Agent: Gnus/5.1007 (Gnus v5.10.7) XEmacs/21.4.17 (Jumbo Shrimp, berkeley-unix) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Subject: New website rendering problem X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 06 Oct 2005 18:23:50 -0000 Murray Stokely wrote: > Please visit http://www.FreeBSD.org and let us know what you think. Rendering problems on FreeBSD 5.4 with linux-mozilla-1.7.8_1 with adobe-times-iso8859-15 minsize 24 on 1600x1200, dpi=112 Window shot: http://people.freebsd.org/~garys/top.jpg * The "Text size" line slightly overlaps the "power to serve" line. * The "button bar" flops over "Based on BSD". * There should be some way of preventing a line break in the middle of "Athlon^TM", but I couldn't find an entity for it (I doubt if   is right). * The "search" field looks like it was intended to be in the button bar, but is not, and the "Search" field label is half white-on-white. * I think "Get FreeBSD Now" sounds cheesy. Drop the "Now". * The two uses of "compatible" should have preceding hyphens, or just omit the words which are not really needed. * That intro para is tough to read. Move the parenthetical phrases into a second sentence, or just omit. * I wonder if "It is derived from" has a problematical tense, since it * sounds like it's still being derived. But "It was derived from" * sounds like it's a finished work. Better: "It is a derivative of". Window shot: http://people.freebsd.org/~garys/bot.jpg * Text goes outside grey box, not that it matters much. * The "More" links are not so much "more" as "all". I'd just make the four column headers/labels be those links or at least put them just under the headers as "news", "events", etc, links, where they are easier to notice and find. * The "Submit Bug" link is indented in a way that makes it look like a continuation of the "More" link just above it (one often sees two links this way that have the same target). It seems out of place anyway and is a duplicate of one of the shortcuts above, so I'd just delete it from the Security column.