From owner-svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Dec 3 20:32:05 2014 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher AECDH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 05A8F47A; Wed, 3 Dec 2014 20:32:05 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id E3EE59AA; Wed, 3 Dec 2014 20:32:04 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.9/8.14.9) with ESMTP id sB3KW4tW094230; Wed, 3 Dec 2014 20:32:04 GMT (envelope-from bcr@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from bcr@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.9/8.14.9/Submit) id sB3KW3tw094223; Wed, 3 Dec 2014 20:32:03 GMT (envelope-from bcr@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201412032032.sB3KW3tw094223@svn.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: svn.freebsd.org: bcr set sender to bcr@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Benedict Reuschling Date: Wed, 3 Dec 2014 20:32:03 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r46061 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook: advanced-networking bsdinstall geom security X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18-1 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 03 Dec 2014 20:32:05 -0000 Author: bcr Date: Wed Dec 3 20:32:03 2014 New Revision: 46061 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46061 Log: Change some sentences where it makes sense to remove the redundant filename and word. Translators can ignore this. Obtained from: igor -E output Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:04:29 2014 (r46060) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:32:03 2014 (r46061) @@ -2194,7 +2194,7 @@ freebsdap 00:11:95:c3:0d:ac 1 Debugging support is provided by &man.wpa.supplicant.8;. Try running this utility manually - with the option and look at the + with and look at the system logs. @@ -4294,8 +4294,8 @@ cd /usr/src/etc; make distribution On the TFTP server, read - /var/log/xferlog to ensure that the - pxeboot file is being retrieved from + /var/log/xferlog to ensure that + pxeboot is being retrieved from the correct location. To test this example configuration: Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:04:29 2014 (r46060) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:32:03 2014 (r46061) @@ -1451,10 +1451,10 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID Multiple file system partitions can be created and some people prefer a traditional layout with separate partitions - for the /, /var, - /tmp, and /usr file - systems. See - for an example. + for /, /var, + /tmp, and /usr. See + for an + example. The Size may be entered with common abbreviations: K for kilobytes, Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:04:29 2014 (r46060) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:32:03 2014 (r46061) @@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ Done. uses a traditional file system layout, with partitions for /, swap, /var, /tmp, and /usr. A - single / file system and a swap partition + single / and a swap partition will also work. Partitions on the mirror do not have to be the same size Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:04:29 2014 (r46060) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:32:03 2014 (r46061) @@ -427,8 +427,8 @@ Enter new password: After installation of this package or port, the system may be checked using the following command. It will produce a lot - of information and will require some manual pressing of the - ENTER key: + of information and will require some manual pressing of + ENTER: &prompt.root; rkhunter -c