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From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Fri, 24 Aug 2001 00:27:06 -0700 (PDT)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking chapter.sgml
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murray      2001/08/24 00:27:05 PDT

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking 
                                                       chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Reword a couple of sentences that I found very confusing.  Often this
  was due to missing words or sentences that made it very difficult to
  understand the text.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.96      +15 -14    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml


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