From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jan 4 21:28:23 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B05C91065679 for ; Mon, 4 Jan 2010 21:28:23 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from dougb@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mail2.fluidhosting.com (mx21.fluidhosting.com [204.14.89.4]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 135718FC20 for ; Mon, 4 Jan 2010 21:28:23 +0000 (UTC) Received: (qmail 28696 invoked by uid 399); 4 Jan 2010 21:28:22 -0000 Received: from localhost (HELO foreign.dougb.net) (dougb@dougbarton.us@127.0.0.1) by localhost with ESMTPAM; 4 Jan 2010 21:28:22 -0000 X-Originating-IP: 127.0.0.1 X-Sender: dougb@dougbarton.us Message-ID: <4B425D7A.7030101@FreeBSD.org> Date: Mon, 04 Jan 2010 13:28:26 -0800 From: Doug Barton Organization: http://SupersetSolutions.com/ User-Agent: Thunderbird 2.0.0.23 (X11/20091206) MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Gavin Atkinson References: <201001042038.o04KcFo8028508@repoman.freebsd.org> In-Reply-To: X-Enigmail-Version: 0.96.0 OpenPGP: id=D5B2F0FB Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 04 Jan 2010 21:28:23 -0000 Gavin Atkinson wrote: > On Mon, 4 Jan 2010, Doug Barton wrote: >> dougb 2010-01-04 20:38:15 UTC >> >> Modified files: >> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml >> Log: >> Actually having the $FreeBSD$ tag expanded in the example rc.d script >> did not end up looking as cool as I thought it would, so switch to an >> unexpanded example. >> >> Fix the text in the new paragraph to work better around the markup. > >> Unless there is a good reason to start the service >> earlier all ports scripts should use >> - REQUIRE: LOGIN. If the service >> + REQUIRE: LOGIN If the service >> runs as a particular user (other than root) this is mandatory. > > This is now grammatically incorrect. I actually think the original is > better than any rewording I can come up with. Take a quick look at the page before it auto-updates. The old way the period ends up all by itself in the text after the programlisting box, so it looks like this: . If the service Doug -- Improve the effectiveness of your Internet presence with a domain name makeover! http://SupersetSolutions.com/ Computers are useless. They can only give you answers. -- Pablo Picasso