From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Jul 2 12:48:18 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9108A352; Tue, 2 Jul 2013 12:48:18 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bjk@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8365D1B3C; Tue, 2 Jul 2013 12:48:18 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id r62CmIvE033408; Tue, 2 Jul 2013 12:48:18 GMT (envelope-from bjk@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from bjk@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.5/Submit) id r62CmImg033407; Tue, 2 Jul 2013 12:48:18 GMT (envelope-from bjk@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201307021248.r62CmImg033407@svn.freebsd.org> From: Benjamin Kaduk Date: Tue, 2 Jul 2013 12:48:18 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42112 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 02 Jul 2013 12:48:18 -0000 Author: bjk Date: Tue Jul 2 12:48:18 2013 New Revision: 42112 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42112 Log: Updates for the Tracking a Development Branch section Grammar tweaks for correctness and readability. Add missing punctuation. Prefer svn to SVN; the latter occurred in only one place. Remove a redundant list item about Subversion versus CTM. Approved by: hrs (mentor) Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Tue Jul 2 11:15:05 2013 (r42111) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Tue Jul 2 12:48:18 2013 (r42112) @@ -1233,7 +1233,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. snapshot - &os.current; is the latest working sources for &os;. + &os.current; is the very latest source code for &os;. This includes work in progress, experimental changes, and transitional mechanisms that might or might not be present in the next official release of the software. While many @@ -1242,7 +1242,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. buildable. These problems are resolved as quickly as possible, but whether or not &os.current; brings disaster or greatly desired functionality can be a matter of when the - source code was synced + source code was synced. @@ -1288,13 +1288,13 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. - A quick way of getting bug fixes, though the fix is + A quick way of getting bug fixes. Any given commit is just as likely to introduce new bugs as to fix existing ones. - In no way officially + In any way officially supported. @@ -1467,7 +1467,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. For these reasons, one should not blindly track &os.stable;. It is particularly important not to update any production servers to &os.stable; without - first thoroughly testing the code in that development + first thoroughly testing the code in a development/testing environment. Except for those users who have the resources to perform @@ -1494,7 +1494,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. to respond if they have any issues to raise concerning the proposed change. - Join the relevant SVN + Join the relevant svn list for the branch being tracked. For example, users tracking the 9-STABLE branch should join the &a.svn-src-stable-9.name; list. This list records the @@ -1510,9 +1510,9 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. - To install a new system in order to run monthly + To install a new system running monthly snapshots built from &os.stable;, refer to Snapshotsfor more + url="&url.base;/snapshots/">Snapshots for more information. Alternatively, it is possible to install the most recent &os.stable; release from the mirror sites and follow the @@ -1569,13 +1569,6 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. - If you need rapid on-demand access to the source and - communications bandwidth is not a consideration, use - Subversion. Otherwise, use - CTM. - - - -STABLE compiling