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From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
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On Tue, May 20, 2003 at 01:12:49PM -0700, Tom Rhodes wrote:
>   Fix a screen tag in another part of the chapter.

Why is this a fix?  You inserted a huge gap between two closely
related commands.  You cd into a directory, then you run the make
command specified.  The two lines should be in one <screen>.

	 - Murray

Like this :
 
-	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd
         /usr/ports/<replaceable>directory</replaceable></userinput></screen>
-	 <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>make MASTER_SITE_OVERRIDE= \
+	 <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd
         /usr/ports/<replaceable>directory</replaceable></userinput>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>make MASTER_SITE_OVERRIDE= \
	       ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/distfiles/
         fetch</userinput></screen>