Date: Thu, 28 Feb 2013 13:17:34 +0000 (UTC) From: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r41061 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge Message-ID: <201302281317.r1SDHYSr001687@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: eadler Date: Thu Feb 28 13:17:34 2013 New Revision: 41061 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41061 Log: Word sentence differently. Submitted by: wblock Approved by: jkois (mentor) Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Thu Feb 28 13:14:14 2013 (r41060) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Thu Feb 28 13:17:34 2013 (r41061) @@ -2577,11 +2577,9 @@ Script done, …</screen> files.</para> </warning> - <para>Next, build a dummy set of directories to install the - new <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and other - files into <filename - class="directory">/var/tmp/root</filename> is a reasonable - choice:</para> + <para>Build a temporary set of directories into which the new + <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and other files + can be installed:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mkdir /var/tmp/root</userinput> &prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/src/etc</userinput>
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