From owner-svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jun 3 19:44:40 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 102431065788; Sun, 3 Jun 2012 19:44:40 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bcr@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::2c]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id EE8928FC1F; Sun, 3 Jun 2012 19:44:39 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id q53Jidsv080957; Sun, 3 Jun 2012 19:44:39 GMT (envelope-from bcr@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from bcr@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id q53Jidtl080955; Sun, 3 Jun 2012 19:44:39 GMT (envelope-from bcr@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201206031944.q53Jidtl080955@svn.freebsd.org> From: Benedict Reuschling Date: Sun, 3 Jun 2012 19:44:39 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Cc: Subject: svn commit: r38971 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 03 Jun 2012 19:44:40 -0000 Author: bcr Date: Sun Jun 3 19:44:39 2012 New Revision: 38971 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/38971 Log: Correct some errors where the tense changes in the middle of the sentence and apply some other wording improvements to make the text more readble. Submitted by: bjk Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml Sun Jun 3 15:14:48 2012 (r38970) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml Sun Jun 3 19:44:39 2012 (r38971) @@ -1435,7 +1435,7 @@ ifconfig_fxp0_alias7="inet 202.0.75.20 n System logging is an important aspect of system administration. It is used both to detect hardware and software - issues and errors in the system, as well as playing a very + issues and errors in the system, it also plays a very important role in security auditing and incident response. System daemons without a controlling terminal also usually log information to a system logging facility or other log @@ -1491,7 +1491,7 @@ ifconfig_fxp0_alias7="inet 202.0.75.20 n forward. The configuration file contains one line per action, and the syntax for each line is a selector field followed by an action field. The syntax of the selector field is - facility.level and this will match + facility.level which will match log messages from facility at level level or higher. It is also possible to add an optional comparison flag before the level @@ -1541,21 +1541,21 @@ cron.* err or higher, as well as kern.warning, auth.notice and - mail.crit, and sends these log messages + mail.crit, and send these log messages to the console (/dev/console). Match all messages from the mail facility at level info or above, and - logs the messages to + log the messages to /var/log/maillog. This line uses a comparison flag, = to only match messages at level debug, - and logs them in + and log them in /var/log/debug.log. @@ -1600,7 +1600,7 @@ cron.* For more information about the different levels and facilities, refer to &man.syslog.3; and &man.syslogd.8;. For more information about syslog.conf, - its syntax and more advanced usage examples, see + its syntax, and more advanced usage examples, see &man.syslog.conf.5; and . @@ -1622,7 +1622,7 @@ cron.* program is used to periodically rotate and compress log files, as well as optionally create missing log files and signal programs when log files are moved. The log files do not - necessarily have to come from syslog, &man.newsyslog.8; works + necessarily have to come from syslog; &man.newsyslog.8; works with any logs written from any program. It is important to note that newsyslog is normally run from &man.cron.8; and is not a system daemon. In the default