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From: Dima Dorfman
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup chapter.sgml
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup chapter.sgml
Log:
Change the example to make it clear in the
rendered version that "net/ethereal" (the example port) is a port.
I.e., change "Install net/ethereal" to "Install the net/ethereal
port". I think this is how it should be done. Nothing about
"net/ethereal" (or any other port described in this way) makes it
clear that this is indeed a port. We can see that from the source,
but to a new user reading the rendered version it's a mystery.
Revision Changes Path
1.43 +3 -2 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml
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