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Wolfram Schneider wrote:

>     107       <p>Then some bright hardware engineer desided that if he
> could
>                                                     ^^^^^^^ ?

Should read decided (made a decision to do something)



>     108       force software to do some sleezey tricks, then he'd be
> able to
>                                         ^^^^^^^ ?


Should read sleazy (less than nice ;-)



>     109       shave a few gates off the design and allow his cpu core to
> run
>     110       faster.  While it was made to work with this new kind of
>     111       hardware (known these dayss as RISC), <tt/a.out/ was
> ill-suited
>                                     ^^^^^ ?


Should read days


<snip>

> reason
>     514         logged with a convenient timestamp next to it.
>                                          ^^^^^^^^^ ?


This may be legitimate? time stamp (marks the time/date) or timestamp
(abridged version)
Perhaps hyphenated time-stamp?


> 
>     911       the BNC one, use ``<tt/link2/''.  These flags should be
> specified
>     912       using the ifconfig_* variables in <htmlurl
>     913       url="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?rc.conf"
>               name="/etc/rc.conf">.
>               ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
>               This link can't work correctly. Some other are the same.
> 


No idea here sorry.



<snip>


>    1050       <p>If you had unintentionally misconfigured your system
> for
>    1051       firewalling, you can restore network operability by typing
> 
>                                                    ^^^^^^^^^^^ ?


operability - this is an actual word. (ability to be operated i.e it
functions)


<sniped>

Not sure of point of the cut bits?




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