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From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Fri, 23 Jul 2004 10:30:48 +0000 (UTC)
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keramida    2004-07-23 10:30:48 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/5-roadmap article.sgml 
  Log:
  Rewrite one of the epilogue paragraphs to avoid excessive use of
  "As..." as the start of a sentence.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.22      +7 -7      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/5-roadmap/article.sgml