From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Dec 17 01:00:22 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1B89818B for ; Mon, 17 Dec 2012 01:00:22 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from lists@eitanadler.com) Received: from mail-lb0-f182.google.com (mail-lb0-f182.google.com [209.85.217.182]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7489F8FC14 for ; Mon, 17 Dec 2012 01:00:20 +0000 (UTC) Received: by mail-lb0-f182.google.com with SMTP id go10so4173818lbb.13 for ; Sun, 16 Dec 2012 17:00:19 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=eitanadler.com; s=0xdeadbeef; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:from:date:message-id:subject:to :cc:content-type; bh=PL1kO6nCefQiPqiy4Vgf686GJEl3mqYp6wKkFAVjwss=; b=NfgSwZlJzLazLXaC9EfAV6tWeQzRR08HPCAX5+210wxRAT5JnZ9C4r/Va3C5wbaI22 ejDyAilQDuwwPFpHvDANMhWiye2TyjXJsn4eKHwg6L+4WGno3zdixeJyo+DxwoBNu7pO 4ecAOYt9y+fKoKtd9veUOw9cvFN6+iENaZ7ks= X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=google.com; s=20120113; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:from:date:message-id:subject:to :cc:content-type:x-gm-message-state; bh=PL1kO6nCefQiPqiy4Vgf686GJEl3mqYp6wKkFAVjwss=; b=WRPJNPsa6oIz/OoQv4UuD4o4jLLPrfEZb2JOa2kWfGGrJdEy3tSIUL/9BGOGFlBqZa uT+9EmQboWqD2Q53rfH3Qu40P9ouwRFiZwqK1WsIpwqFlNS3QsqdrcZqBIvhlMZewyiH 4vHsOo8inV1rrK+VsSuLQAOMjXo2yL5NE5Dy5uBpuqTFw+/nosa0hpjnCyRNB04usuFC ilds7P60S022QWWdNK/+ELZV/od6faOcUy32xAO6Vg77l5sLmpVQ9FjFfnTEPE6coqW2 EKYKsoNR6s/B7sLEcxizeeKGna6Q9JybJQHaydcUNjF3v2GiEAyJMF3shdYoVgTuJl8i UHtg== Received: by 10.112.28.65 with SMTP id z1mr5114078lbg.119.1355706019758; Sun, 16 Dec 2012 17:00:19 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.112.149.225 with HTTP; Sun, 16 Dec 2012 16:59:47 -0800 (PST) In-Reply-To: <50CE6891.2080303@gmail.com> References: <50CE6891.2080303@gmail.com> From: Eitan Adler Date: Sun, 16 Dec 2012 19:59:47 -0500 Message-ID: Subject: Re: patch for ThwackAFAQ differences-to-other-bsds To: Alex Weber Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary=bcaec554d9d6ba41a904d101e74c X-Gm-Message-State: ALoCoQkP+n+BwJKGTaCJ4IQdEde2hjCKDaYlo3rlb0KxgOaFNWpvtkgEEGITMerKrCWlfDyveAo/ Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 17 Dec 2012 01:00:22 -0000 --bcaec554d9d6ba41a904d101e74c Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 On 16 December 2012 19:34, Alex Weber wrote: > Hello list, > > This is my first patch to the FreeBSD docs, so please let me know if > I've done something wrong! :) This is a really good start! A few comments. Almost all of them are formatting, rather than content nits. This is good. :) - Try not to change whitespace and content in the same diff. 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