Date: Sun, 16 Dec 2012 19:59:47 -0500 From: Eitan Adler <lists@eitanadler.com> To: Alex Weber <alexwebr@gmail.com> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: patch for ThwackAFAQ differences-to-other-bsds Message-ID: <CAF6rxgmhfWOUkVaHRNKcht8JbapgP3ouEM6Wcnq3Z2%2Bqwrj8Ew@mail.gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <50CE6891.2080303@gmail.com> References: <50CE6891.2080303@gmail.com>
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--bcaec554d9d6ba41a904d101e74c Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 On 16 December 2012 19:34, Alex Weber <alexwebr@gmail.com> wrote: > Hello list, > > This is my first patch to the FreeBSD docs, so please let me know if > I've done something wrong! :) This is a really good start! A few comments. Almost all of them are formatting, rather than content nits. This is good. :) - Try not to change whitespace and content in the same diff. This makes it harder for our translators to see what changed. - The maximum line length is 70 (with some exceptions, e.g., for links) - "FreeBSD" is spelled "&os;" - http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/openssh.html is spelled &url.books.handbook;/openssh.html - ssh(1) can also be spelled &man.ssh.1; - items at the same indentation level should have an extra newline - sentences have double spaces I've attached a modified diff so you could see how it may look. > > This patch seeks to update the FAQ question "What are the differences > between FreeBSD and NetBSD, OpenBSD, and other open source BSD operating > systems?" listed in the ThwackAFAQ wiki. > > I've attached the patch as 'differences-to-other-bsds.patch'. > > -Alex Weber > > _______________________________________________ > freebsd-doc@freebsd.org mailing list > http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-doc > To unsubscribe, send any mail to "freebsd-doc-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" > -- Eitan Adler --bcaec554d9d6ba41a904d101e74c Content-Type: application/octet-stream; name="new-differences.diff" Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="new-differences.diff" Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64 X-Attachment-Id: f_haswaoec1 Y29tbWl0IDljOWJlZWUzZTIyNGMzYzBhNDE2ZDg0MWIyMjg1YWVjNTkyNzRmMWYKQXV0aG9yOiBF aXRhbiBBZGxlciA8bGlzdHNAZWl0YW5hZGxlci5jb20+CkRhdGU6ICAgU3VuIERlYyAxNiAxOTo1 NzozNyAyMDEyIC0wNTAwCgogICAgVXBkYXRlIGFuZCBleHBhbmQgb24gdGhlIGRpZmZlcmVuY2Vz IHRvIG90aGVyIGJzZHMgcXVlc3Rpb24uCiAgICAKICAgIFN1Ym1pdHRlZCBieToJQWxleCBXZWJl ciA8YWxleHdlYnJAZ21haWwuY29tPgogICAgQXBwcm92ZWQgYnk6CT8/PyAobWVudG9yKQoKZGlm ZiAtLWdpdCBhL2VuX1VTLklTTzg4NTktMS9ib29rcy9mYXEvYm9vay54bWwgYi9lbl9VUy5JU084 ODU5LTEvYm9va3MvZmFxL2Jvb2sueG1sCmluZGV4IDQ0Y2M0YzAuLjNiMjk3YTYgMTAwNjQ0Ci0t LSBhL2VuX1VTLklTTzg4NTktMS9ib29rcy9mYXEvYm9vay54bWwKKysrIGIvZW5fVVMuSVNPODg1 OS0xL2Jvb2tzL2ZhcS9ib29rLnhtbApAQCAtMzA1LDcgKzMwNSw0MCBAQAogCSAgICBkaWZmZXJl bmNlcyBiZXR3ZWVuIHRoZSB2YXJpb3VzIHByb2plY3RzLAogCSAgICBjYWxsZWQgPHVsaW5rCiAJ ICAgICAgdXJsPSJodHRwOi8vd3d3LmZyZWVic2R3b3JsZC5nci9mcmVlYnNkL2JzZC1mYW1pbHkt dHJlZS5odG1sIj5UaGUgQlNEIEZhbWlseSBUcmVlPC91bGluaz4KLQkgICAgd2hpY2ggZ29lcyBh IGZhaXIgd2F5IHRvIGFuc3dlcmluZyB0aGlzIHF1ZXN0aW9uLjwvcGFyYT4KKwkgICAgd2hpY2gg Z29lcyBhIGZhaXIgd2F5IHRvIGFuc3dlcmluZyB0aGlzIHF1ZXN0aW9uLgorCSAgICBTb21lIG9m IHRoZSBpbmZvcm1hdGlvbiBpcyBvdXQgb2YgZGF0ZSwgYnV0IHRoZSBoaXN0b3J5CisJICAgIHBv cnRpb24gaW4gcGFydGljdWxhciByZW1haW5zIGFjY3VyYXRlLjwvcGFyYT4KKworCSAgPHBhcmE+ TW9zdCBvZiB0aGUgQlNEcyBzaGFyZSBwYXRjaGVzIGFuZCBjb2RlLCBldmVuIHRvZGF5LgorCSAg ICBBbGwgb2YgdGhlIEJTRHMgaGF2ZSBjb21tb24gYW5jZXN0cnkuPC9wYXJhPgorCisJICA8cGFy YT5UaGUgZGVzaWduIGdvYWxzIG9mICZvczsgYXJlIGRlc2NyaWJlZCBpbgorCSAgICA8eHJlZiBs aW5rZW5kPSJGcmVlQlNELWdvYWxzIi8+LCBhYm92ZS4gIFRoZSBkZXNpZ24gZ29hbHMKKwkgICAg b2YgdGhlIG90aGVyIG1vc3QgcG9wdWxhciBCU0RzIG1heSBiZSBzdW1tYXJpemVkIGFzCisJICAg IGZvbGxvd3M6PC9wYXJhPgorCisJICA8aXRlbWl6ZWRsaXN0PgorCSAgICA8bGlzdGl0ZW0+CisJ ICAgICAgPHBhcmE+T3BlbkJTRCBhaW1zIGZvciBvcGVyYXRpbmcgc3lzdGVtIHNlY3VyaXR5IGFi b3ZlCisJCWFsbCBlbHNlLiBUaGUgT3BlbkJTRCB0ZWFtIHdyb3RlCisJCTx1bGluaworCQkgIHVy bD0iJnVybC5ib29rcy5oYW5kYm9vazsvb3BlbnNzaC5odG1sIj5PcGVuU1NIPC91bGluaz4KKwkJ YW5kICZtYW4ucGYuNDssCisJICAgICAgICB3aGljaCBoYXZlIGJvdGggYmVlbiBwb3J0ZWQgdG8g Jm9zOy48L3BhcmE+CisJICAgIDwvbGlzdGl0ZW0+CisKKwkgICAgPGxpc3RpdGVtPgorCSAgICAg IDxwYXJhPk5ldEJTRCBhaW1zIHRvIGJlIGVhc2lseSBwb3J0ZWQgdG8gb3RoZXIgaGFyZHdhcmUK KwkJcGxhdGZvcm1zLjwvcGFyYT4KKwkgICAgPC9saXN0aXRlbT4KKworCSAgICA8bGlzdGl0ZW0+ CisJICAgICAgPHBhcmE+RHJhZ29uRmx5QlNEIGlzIGEgZm9yayBvZiAmb3M7Jm5ic3A7NC44IHRo YXQgaGFzCisJCXNpbmNlIGRldmVsb3BlZCBtYW55IGludGVyZXN0aW5nIGZlYXR1cmVzIG9mIGl0 cyBvd24sCisJCWluY2x1ZGluZyB0aGUgSEFNTUVSIGZpbGUgc3lzdGVtIGFuZCBzdXBwb3J0IGZv cgorCQl1c2VyLW1vZGUgPHF1b3RlPnZrZXJuZWxzPC9xdW90ZT4uPC9wYXJhPgorCSAgICA8L2xp c3RpdGVtPgorCSAgPC9pdGVtaXplZGxpc3Q+CiAJPC9hbnN3ZXI+CiAgICAgICA8L3FhbmRhZW50 cnk+CiAK --bcaec554d9d6ba41a904d101e74c--
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