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From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
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murray      2003/05/04 00:23:00 PDT

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  The floppy disk section was previously 4.x-centric, written in a very
  informal style, and full of grammatical errors.  Improve this
  situation somewhat.
  
  Submitted by:   Martin Karlsson <mk-freebsd@bredband.net> (mostly)
  PR:             docs/50761
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.150     +128 -106  doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml