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keramida    2007-09-17 21:02:43 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/5-roadmap article.sgml 
  Log:
  Avoid using "It was", but use a more explicit reference to the
  version-guide article in the abstract of 5-roadmap.  This way
  the text is a bit less confusing.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.28      +2 -2      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/5-roadmap/article.sgml