From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Aug 5 19:51:31 2006 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-docs@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 054F816A4DD; Sat, 5 Aug 2006 19:51:31 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from duane@dwpc.dwlabs.ca) Received: from smtpout.eastlink.ca (smtpout.eastlink.ca [24.222.0.30]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9108343D46; Sat, 5 Aug 2006 19:51:27 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from duane@dwpc.dwlabs.ca) Received: from ip02.eastlink.ca ([24.222.10.10]) by mta01.eastlink.ca (Sun Java System Messaging Server 6.2-4.03 (built Sep 22 2005)) with ESMTP id <0J3J00C92J6SZDH0@mta01.eastlink.ca>; Sat, 05 Aug 2006 16:52:04 -0300 (ADT) Received: from blk-224-199-230.eastlink.ca (HELO dwpc.dwlabs.ca) ([24.224.199.230]) by ip02.eastlink.ca with ESMTP; Sat, 05 Aug 2006 16:51:26 -0300 Received: from dwpc.dwlabs.ca (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by dwpc.dwlabs.ca (8.13.6/8.13.6) with ESMTP id k75JmKeZ048829; Sat, 05 Aug 2006 16:48:20 -0300 (ADT envelope-from duane@dwpc.dwlabs.ca) Received: (from duane@localhost) by dwpc.dwlabs.ca (8.13.6/8.13.6/Submit) id k75JmK9J048828; Sat, 05 Aug 2006 16:48:20 -0300 (ADT envelope-from duane) Date: Sat, 05 Aug 2006 16:48:20 -0300 From: Duane Whitty In-reply-to: <200606182110.k5ILAHIB004535@freefall.freebsd.org> To: Mark Linimon Message-id: <20060805194820.GA39488@dwpc.dwlabs.ca> MIME-version: 1.0 Content-type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-transfer-encoding: 7BIT Content-disposition: inline X-BrightmailFiltered: true X-Brightmail-Tracker: AAAAAQAAA+k= References: <200606182110.k5ILAHIB004535@freefall.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Mutt/1.4.2.1i Cc: freebsd-docs@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/98344: [patch] An update of the article "Choosing the FreeBSD Version that is Right for You" X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 05 Aug 2006 19:51:31 -0000 On Sun, Jun 18, 2006 at 09:10:17PM +0000, Mark Linimon wrote: > Synopsis: [patch] An update of the article "Choosing the FreeBSD Version that is Right for You" > > State-Changed-From-To: open->feedback > State-Changed-By: linimon > State-Changed-When: Sun Jun 18 21:07:55 UTC 2006 > State-Changed-Why: > Unfortunately you have mixed whitespace changes (tabs) with content > changes, and this makes it very difficult to see exactly what has changed. > > The Style Guide says both that whitespace changes should be committed > separately from content changes, and that the standard for indentation is > two spaces for each level, with each instance of 8 spaces, starting at > the beginning of the line, changed to a tab. Can you please revise the > patch according to this indentation and resubmit? > > > Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->linimon > Responsible-Changed-By: linimon > Responsible-Changed-When: Sun Jun 18 21:07:55 UTC 2006 > Responsible-Changed-Why: > Since I wrote the original article, I'll take this. > > http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=98344 Hi Mark, Sorry for this taking so long. I guess I was on a vacation for a while. :) I've fixed my additions to the above mentioned document to more closely follow the Style Guide. I hope this makes it easier to see what has changed. If there are any additional changes required I will take care of them right away. The article itself can be found at http://www.dwlabs.ca/freebsd/docs/version-guide/article.html The diff file can be found at http://www.dwlabs.ca/freebsd/docs/version-guide/version-guide.diff Thanks for your guidance in this matter. Sincerely, Duane Whitty duane@dwlabs.ca