From owner-cvs-all@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Mar 26 16:42:26 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DC740106566C; Mon, 26 Mar 2012 16:42:26 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (repoman.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::29]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B04A38FC18; Mon, 26 Mar 2012 16:42:26 +0000 (UTC) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id q2QGgQjp026327; Mon, 26 Mar 2012 16:42:26 GMT (envelope-from eadler@repoman.freebsd.org) Received: (from eadler@localhost) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id q2QGgQ16026326; Mon, 26 Mar 2012 16:42:26 GMT (envelope-from eadler) Message-Id: <201203261642.q2QGgQ16026326@repoman.freebsd.org> From: Eitan Adler Date: Mon, 26 Mar 2012 16:42:26 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org X-FreeBSD-CVS-Branch: HEAD Cc: Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: **OBSOLETE** CVS commit messages for the entire tree List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 26 Mar 2012 16:42:27 -0000 eadler 2012-03-26 16:42:26 UTC FreeBSD doc repository (src,ports committer) Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml Log: Rewrite the config chapter to be more clear and use professional language. PR: docs/164920 Submitted by: Niclas Zeising Reviewed by: gjb (older version) Approved by: bcr Revision Changes Path 1.252 +50 -26 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml