From owner-freebsd-net@FreeBSD.ORG Thu May 31 17:53:46 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-net@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7B4C6106564A; Thu, 31 May 2012 17:53:46 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from seanbru@yahoo-inc.com) Received: from mrout1-b.corp.bf1.yahoo.com (mrout1-b.corp.bf1.yahoo.com [98.139.253.104]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 24BB98FC0C; Thu, 31 May 2012 17:53:46 +0000 (UTC) Received: from [IPv6:::1] (rideseveral.corp.yahoo.com [10.73.160.231]) by mrout1-b.corp.bf1.yahoo.com (8.14.4/8.14.4/y.out) with ESMTP id q4VHrT36021735; Thu, 31 May 2012 10:53:29 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=yahoo-inc.com; s=cobra; t=1338486810; bh=2f13zPp2/n3iaIwic8QPpb2UTwEijraii4bH5oNi2v8=; h=Subject:From:To:Cc:In-Reply-To:References:Content-Type:Date: Message-ID:Mime-Version:Content-Transfer-Encoding; b=gdlm2J3KW6g8QFvH5S10zkLj+QBdAJDVfWWOdR1+yTSjvfU3g03OYb+/Gl5RpszpB PYo0xu4g7LNvlMvaC6uxmg7xN1wByqEQWFnSnKzsbEqT4dkzHYlrnJ/uxeaNDI0sKt nLoUHaGiwrotCHOVXb7EXj4PcChVUmIY34F8otBI= From: Sean Bruno To: Warren Block In-Reply-To: <1338484537.2985.8.camel@powernoodle-l7.corp.yahoo.com> References: <1338424909.9051.12.camel@powernoodle-l7.corp.yahoo.com> <1338484537.2985.8.camel@powernoodle-l7.corp.yahoo.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Date: Thu, 31 May 2012 10:53:28 -0700 Message-ID: <1338486809.2985.10.camel@powernoodle-l7.corp.yahoo.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 X-Mailer: Evolution 2.32.1 FreeBSD GNOME Team Port Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Milter-Version: master.31+4-gbc07cd5+ X-CLX-ID: 486809003 Cc: "freebsd-net@freebsd.org" Subject: Re: bce(4) man page updates X-BeenThere: freebsd-net@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Networking and TCP/IP with FreeBSD List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 31 May 2012 17:53:46 -0000 On Thu, 2012-05-31 at 10:15 -0700, Sean Bruno wrote: > On Thu, 2012-05-31 at 05:46 -0700, Warren Block wrote: > > On Wed, 30 May 2012, Sean Bruno wrote: > > > > > Was trolling around inside of bce(4) and the Broadcom docs today and > > > made the following update to the man page. Thoughts? > > > > > > Sean > > > > > > http://people.freebsd.org/~sbruno/bce_man.txt > > > > Nice! > > > > Just minor suggestions. > > > > The two "whether or not" sentences ought to be just "Enable/Disable ..." > > like the rest. > > > > A couple of "Cannot be assigned the value 0" sentences can be simpler as > > "Cannot be set to 0" if that doesn't change the meaning. > > > > "Valid values are in the range from 0-256." can be simpler as > > "Values from 0-256 are valid." > > > > Many "The default value is" which could be simplified to "The default > > is", or added to the end of a previous sentence as an aside: > > "Values from 0-100 are valid (default 18)." > > > Indeed. Much more gooder wordingness. Updated! > > http://people.freebsd.org/~sbruno/bce_man.txt > > Sean > Updated again, looks like one of the tuneables has changed in -head: hw.bce.loose_rx_mtu --> hw.bce.strict_rx_mtu Sean