Date: Thu, 2 Apr 2015 23:44:37 +0000 (UTC) From: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r46433 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/compiz-fusion Message-ID: <201504022344.t32NibiC069110@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: eadler Date: Thu Apr 2 23:44:36 2015 New Revision: 46433 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46433 Log: compiz-fusion: remove snark rewrite abstract to not be snarky and to better explain the point of the article. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/compiz-fusion/article.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/compiz-fusion/article.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/compiz-fusion/article.xml Thu Apr 2 23:36:26 2015 (r46432) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/compiz-fusion/article.xml Thu Apr 2 23:44:36 2015 (r46433) @@ -24,18 +24,12 @@ </legalnotice> <abstract> - <para>The Linux world has been overwhelmed lately by what seems to be - the latest fashion: 3D Desktop effects. While their usefulness is - rather heavily debated, the wow factor behind the composited desktop - holds quite well. Several different programs have emerged, like - <link xlink:href="http://compiz.org/"><application>Compiz</application></link>, - <link xlink:href="http://www.beryl-project.org/"><application>Beryl</application></link>, - and the latest <link xlink:href="http://www.compiz-fusion.org/"><application>Compiz Fusion</application></link>. - You do not need to miss these effects when using &os;. These - instructions will help you install and configure your system for the - latest 3D desktop experience using - <application>Compiz Fusion</application> and nVidia drivers - (if applicable).</para> + <para>One way to increase the pleasantness of using a desktop + computer is by having nice 3D effects. + This article walks through the installation + <application>Compiz</application> which is one example + program which to produce nice effects. It assumes the use of + nVidia drivers, although these are not required.</para> </abstract> </info>
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