From owner-cvs-all@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Sep 5 14:26:53 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1593616A4BF; Fri, 5 Sep 2003 14:26:53 -0700 (PDT) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (repoman.freebsd.org [216.136.204.115]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8AA6E43FB1; Fri, 5 Sep 2003 14:26:52 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from chern@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.12.6/8.12.6) with ESMTP id h85LQq0U062059; Fri, 5 Sep 2003 14:26:52 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from chern@repoman.freebsd.org) Received: (from chern@localhost) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.12.6/8.12.6/Submit) id h85LQq79062058; Fri, 5 Sep 2003 14:26:52 -0700 (PDT) Message-Id: <200309052126.h85LQq79062058@repoman.freebsd.org> From: Chern Lee Date: Fri, 5 Sep 2003 14:26:52 -0700 (PDT) To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org X-FreeBSD-CVS-Branch: HEAD Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface preface.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the entire tree List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 05 Sep 2003 21:26:53 -0000 chern 2003/09/05 14:26:52 PDT FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface preface.sgml Log: Remove a superflous comma Add a blurb explaining combinations Change "rendered" to "shown" for simplicity Sponsored by: FreeBSD Mall, Inc. Revision Changes Path 1.18 +6 -3 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml