From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Dec 18 01:47:32 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 57E51406 for ; Tue, 18 Dec 2012 01:47:32 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from lists@eitanadler.com) Received: from mail-lb0-f181.google.com (mail-lb0-f181.google.com [209.85.217.181]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BBB5D8FC14 for ; Tue, 18 Dec 2012 01:47:31 +0000 (UTC) Received: by mail-lb0-f181.google.com with SMTP id ge1so184428lbb.40 for ; Mon, 17 Dec 2012 17:47:30 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=eitanadler.com; s=0xdeadbeef; h=mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from:date :x-google-sender-auth:message-id:subject:to:cc:content-type; bh=CihgQSDqbsZBzdorXfOehACCl6VM1Oi096yhMNQEQp0=; b=WMLdDX1jZ1n7XOmq+Z3Oc1D409Xx/nDWLJ7EyoW4sqbj8ywdqjWIyoF0Zw9RMoCIz0 QSG3cuoztkkfVBtThPVRSNlfXzGuLu2FAbF+9Y4q002ULwwNjEUAiGMFmw5s7d6Kno5S ZPNjeUgdgBj6FtzGKKwsPlNKi6Vs/EBVz49Hc= X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=google.com; s=20120113; h=mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from:date :x-google-sender-auth:message-id:subject:to:cc:content-type :x-gm-message-state; bh=CihgQSDqbsZBzdorXfOehACCl6VM1Oi096yhMNQEQp0=; b=k7AlBg6DKolFid8BYY+qOowdBKAhZQPtm+6c/eBeel9EdTpqJDP/ySkEl7tXD57wee V16GCz6Kue6JpFbIkoMBNheZSWOLUvMjgJTvrxc5IecBZdhwnnWGoZH5ds0qEGiUopAK 8nqkS+RiKUb3Jc9HBXEnqmRHHXdq4h/uOh4UTNpwl79W4F1T/nn0EeFjhdJ4wrhWK9ub enQi1iLqaWY5LqhVpb7uU1nfTx/3rP+VOh/yviG/V8+OVhEZ1TQAKUln5PotdAr657K7 cP4PZ3VjbDHpybOdhkdIf3ja5zn3WyzmE0LtGbziMKo4E4zgSjt5bhfYJApOWnuT/exH 90hg== Received: by 10.112.46.70 with SMTP id t6mr180621lbm.107.1355794947078; Mon, 17 Dec 2012 17:42:27 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Sender: lists@eitanadler.com Received: by 10.112.149.225 with HTTP; Mon, 17 Dec 2012 17:41:56 -0800 (PST) In-Reply-To: References: <201212171601.qBHG1rC1019088@svn.freebsd.org> From: Eitan Adler Date: Mon, 17 Dec 2012 20:41:56 -0500 X-Google-Sender-Auth: oT4B3ruXGiBY1EGSowSi6uYnR4I Message-ID: Subject: Re: svn commit: r40403 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq To: Benjamin Kaduk Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 X-Gm-Message-State: ALoCoQmbY4L2lFcWPex6SnB3WK09jjGwflLYOvBCOgB4perc+53qeX4QF9cruiZN5kaTpjDKIZcX Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 18 Dec 2012 01:47:32 -0000 On 17 December 2012 12:50, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > On Mon, 17 Dec 2012, Eitan Adler wrote: > >> Author: eadler >> Date: Mon Dec 17 16:01:53 2012 >> New Revision: 40403 >> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40403 >> >> Log: >> Modernize ppp-drop-heavy-load to conform with current defaults. >> >> Submitted by: Daniel O'Connor >> Approved by: bcr (mentor) >> >> Modified: >> head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml >> >> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml >> >> ============================================================================== >> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Mon Dec 17 16:01:51 2012 >> (r40402) >> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Mon Dec 17 16:01:53 2012 >> (r40403) >> @@ -7245,13 +7245,12 @@ add 0 0 HISADDR >> >> If you have Link Quality Reporting (LQR) configured, it >> is possible that too many LQR packets are lost between your >> - machine and the peer. The &man.ppp.8; program deduces that >> - the line must therefore be bad, and disconnects. Prior to >> - &os; version 2.2.5, LQR was enabled by default. It is now >> - disabled by default. LQR can be disabled with the following >> - line: >> + machine and the peer. &man.ppp.8; deduces that > > > Hmm, starting a sentence with an entity, somewhat questionable. > > Why not "Such packet loss causes &man.ppp.8; to deduce that"? No objection to this. -- Eitan Adler Source, Ports, Doc committer Bugmeister, Ports Security teams