From owner-freebsd-doc Fri Jul 6 3:30:17 2001 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9586D37B405 for ; Fri, 6 Jul 2001 03:30:02 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.11.3/8.11.3) id f66AU2O07065; Fri, 6 Jul 2001 03:30:02 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats) Received: from mailsrv.otenet.gr (mailsrv.otenet.gr [195.170.0.5]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4313637B401 for ; Fri, 6 Jul 2001 03:24:17 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from keramida@ceid.upatras.gr) Received: from hades.hell.gr (patr530-b119.otenet.gr [195.167.121.247]) by mailsrv.otenet.gr (8.11.1/8.11.1) with ESMTP id f66AO2h22643 for ; Fri, 6 Jul 2001 13:24:02 +0300 (EEST) Received: (from charon@localhost) by hades.hell.gr (8.11.4/8.11.3) id f66AKe929574; Fri, 6 Jul 2001 13:20:40 +0300 (EEST) (envelope-from charon) Message-Id: <200107061020.f66AKe929574@hades.hell.gr> Date: Fri, 6 Jul 2001 13:20:40 +0300 (EEST) From: Giorgos Keramidas Reply-To: Giorgos Keramidas To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Subject: docs/28766: various whitespace, typos and tag fixes for articles/diskless-x/article.sgml Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org >Number: 28766 >Category: docs >Synopsis: various whitespace, typos and tag fixes for articles/diskless-x/article.sgml >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Fri Jul 06 03:30:02 PDT 2001 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Giorgos Keramidas >Release: FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD hades.hell.gr 5.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT #0: Sun Jun 24 18:34:43 EEST 2001 root@hades.hell.gr:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/CHARON i386 >Description: The attached patch fixes various little details of the diskless-x article. It changes a few whitespace and typo errors that I found, and adds some markup to places where it seemed proper. I didn't want to file seperate PR's for whitespace fixes, another for typos, and yet another for added markup. I also did not reindent the text, since it makes the patch look awful. I guess these have to be committed separately, and then indentation be reapplied to the article source though :/ >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/diskless-x/article.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/diskless-x/article.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.4 diff -u -r1.4 article.sgml --- en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/diskless-x/article.sgml 2001/04/17 15:53:37 1.4 +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/diskless-x/article.sgml 2001/07/06 10:14:55 @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ - Jerry + Jerry Kendall
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ Booting across the network Boot the diskless system with out any config.sys/autoexec.bat - files. try running the boot program for your Ethernet adapter. + files. Try running the boot program for your Ethernet adapter. My Ethernet adapter is running in WD8013 16bit mode so I run nb8390.com @@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ If you have to change the /etc/inetd.conf file, send a HUP signal to inetd. To do this, get the process ID of inetd with ps -ax | grep inetd | grep -v - grep. Once you have it, send it a HUP signal. Do this by + grep. Once you have it, send it a HUP signal. Do this by kill -HUP <pid>. This will force inetd to re-read its config file. @@ -249,11 +249,11 @@ are my own. - Create the directory '/tftpboot' on the server it will contain the + Create the directory /tftpboot on the server it will contain the configuration files for the diskless systems that the server will serve. - These files will be named 'cfg.<ip>' where <ip> is the IP - address of the diskless system. The config file for 'altair' is - /tftpboot/cfg.199.246.76.2. The contents is: + These files will be named cfg.ip where ip is the IP + address of the diskless system. The config file for altair is + /tftpboot/cfg.199.246.76.2. The contents is: rootfs 199.246.76.1:/DiskLess/rootfs/altair hostname altair.kcis.com @@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ I use my spare 386DX-40 as a dedicated X terminal. - The hierarchy for 'altair' is: + The hierarchy for altair is: / /bin >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message