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Date: Thu, 13 Jul 2006 19:49:33 +0000
From: "Ben Kaduk" <minimarmot@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: cvs commit:
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On 7/12/06, Tom Rhodes <trhodes@freebsd.org> wrote:
> trhodes     2006-07-12 02:18:19 UTC
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>   FreeBSD doc repository
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>   Modified files:
>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/kerneldebug
>                                                           chapter.sgml
>   Log:
>   MFp4: Bring the kernel debugging section up to reality.
>
>   Requested by:   rwatson
>
>   Revision  Changes    Path
>   1.67      +35 -16    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/kerneldebug/chapter.sgml
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Hello, Tom,

I am sorry to be picking nits here, but I think that in this hunk:
@@ -498,6 +498,7 @@
     <para>To configure your kernel to include DDB, add the option line

       <programlisting>options DDB</programlisting>
+      <programlisting>options KDB</programlisting>

       to your config file, and rebuild.  (See <ulink
 	url="&url.books.handbook;/index.html">The FreeBSD Handbook</ulink>
for details on

you should be saying "add the option lines" instead of "add the option
line" -- now, we want the user to add both DDB and KDB, so the plural
seems appropriate.

Thanks for adding this update -- I think I missed a couple of the
changes that went in!

-Ben Kaduk