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Subject: Re: docs/157245: [PATCH] [RFC] Add a section about DNSSEC to the
 DNS chapter in the handbook
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Excellent work! :)  2 small nits remain, otherwise this looks good to go.

On 05/23/2011 05:50, Niclas Zeising wrote:

>   +	  found in<ulink url="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4641.txt">

The href should be http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4641 as they are in 
29.6.10. The tools site has a much better overall viewing experience, 
and more importantly gives clear indications if an RFC has been obsoleted.

>   +	<programlisting>$include Kexample.com.+005+nnnnn.KSK.key    ; ZSK
>   +$include Kexample.com.+005+nnnnn.ZSK.key    ; KSK</programlisting>

The labels after the ;comment are reversed. The first should be KSK.


hth,

Doug

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