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Subject: Re: docs/74612: Updates to the glossary
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On Thu, 2 Dec 2004, John Baldwin wrote:
> On Thursday 02 December 2004 09:30 am, Gavin Atkinson wrote:
> > The following reply was made to PR docs/74612; it has been noted by GNATS.
> >
> > From: Gavin Atkinson <gavin.atkinson@ury.york.ac.uk>
> > To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
> > Cc:
> > Subject: Re: docs/74612: Updates to the glossary
> > Date: Thu, 02 Dec 2004 14:30:17 +0000
> >
> >  Hmm, apparently the attach never actually worked.  Patch at
> >
> >  http://www.devrandom.co.uk/freebsd/glossary2.diff
>
> Looks good to me.  One suggestion is to use 'IP address' rather than
> 'IP-address' (i.e. drop the hyphen/dash) in the DNS entry.

Agreed, thanks!  I've updated the patch.

Gavin