From owner-freebsd-doc Thu Aug 15 01:37:14 1996 Return-Path: owner-doc Received: (from root@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.7.5/8.7.3) id BAA24688 for doc-outgoing; Thu, 15 Aug 1996 01:37:14 -0700 (PDT) Received: from silvia.HIP.Berkeley.EDU (silvia.HIP.Berkeley.EDU [136.152.64.181]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.7.5/8.7.3) with ESMTP id BAA24683; Thu, 15 Aug 1996 01:37:11 -0700 (PDT) Received: (from asami@localhost) by silvia.HIP.Berkeley.EDU (8.7.5/8.6.9) id BAA17916; Thu, 15 Aug 1996 01:37:03 -0700 (PDT) Date: Thu, 15 Aug 1996 01:37:03 -0700 (PDT) Message-Id: <199608150837.BAA17916@silvia.HIP.Berkeley.EDU> To: jkh@time.cdrom.com CC: doc@freebsd.org, jkh@freebsd.org In-reply-to: <17892.840097857@time.cdrom.com> (jkh@time.cdrom.com) Subject: Re: New section: development From: asami@cs.berkeley.edu (Satoshi Asami) Sender: owner-doc@freebsd.org X-Loop: FreeBSD.org Precedence: bulk * Hmmm. The text is a bit flowery, and I'm not sure it quite paints * quite the picture of the project I'd want to paint if I attempted to * write such a document myself. Would you be offended if I played * "editor" here and fed you some stylistic edits before you committed * this thing? Of course not, please tell me what you think by all means! Satoshi