From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Jul 23 00:00:22 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9F165F1B; Tue, 23 Jul 2013 00:00:22 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 766662B89; Tue, 23 Jul 2013 00:00:22 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id r6N00MjT072151; Tue, 23 Jul 2013 00:00:22 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.5/Submit) id r6N00Mje072150; Tue, 23 Jul 2013 00:00:22 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201307230000.r6N00Mje072150@svn.freebsd.org> From: Warren Block Date: Tue, 23 Jul 2013 00:00:22 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42390 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 23 Jul 2013 00:00:22 -0000 Author: wblock Date: Tue Jul 23 00:00:21 2013 New Revision: 42390 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42390 Log: Whitespace-only fixes. Translators, please ignore. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml Mon Jul 22 23:56:53 2013 (r42389) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 00:00:21 2013 (r42390) @@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ A trivial example is better than no example. A good example is better yet. Do not give bad examples, identifiable by apologies or sentences like but really it should never - be done that way. Bad examples are worse than no + be done that way. Bad examples are worse than no examples. Give good examples, because even when warned not to use the example as shown, the reader will usually just use the example as shown. @@ -244,11 +244,10 @@ Emacs. A period and spaces followed by a capital letter - does not always mark a new sentence, - especially in names. - Jordan K. Hubbard is a good example. It has - a capital H following a period and a - space, and is certainly not a new sentence. + does not always mark a new sentence, especially in names. + Jordan K. Hubbard is a good example. It + has a capital H following a period and + a space, and is certainly not a new sentence. @@ -282,13 +281,13 @@ Acronyms - Acronyms should be defined the first time - they appear in a document, as in: Network Time Protocol - (NTP). - After the acronym has been defined, use - the acronym alone unless it makes more - sense contextually to use the whole term. Acronyms are usually - defined only once per chapter or per document. + Acronyms should be defined the first time they appear in a + document, as in: + Network Time Protocol (NTP). + After the acronym has been defined, use the acronym alone + unless it makes more sense contextually to use the whole term. + Acronyms are usually defined only once per chapter or per + document. All acronyms should be enclosed in acronym tags.