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Sat, 29 Mar 2025 07:39:37 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) X-Authentication-Warning: kenobi.freebsd.org: www set sender to bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org using -f From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 267428] FDP primer: Writing style: corrections to indents/levels et cetera Date: Sat, 29 Mar 2025 07:39:37 +0000 X-Bugzilla-Reason: AssignedTo X-Bugzilla-Type: changed X-Bugzilla-Watch-Reason: None X-Bugzilla-Product: Documentation X-Bugzilla-Component: Books & Articles X-Bugzilla-Version: Latest X-Bugzilla-Keywords: needs-patch, needs-qa X-Bugzilla-Severity: Affects Some People X-Bugzilla-Who: grahamperrin@freebsd.org X-Bugzilla-Status: Open X-Bugzilla-Resolution: X-Bugzilla-Priority: --- X-Bugzilla-Assigned-To: doc@FreeBSD.org X-Bugzilla-Flags: X-Bugzilla-Changed-Fields: resolution keywords bug_status Message-ID: In-Reply-To: References: Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" X-Bugzilla-URL: https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/ Auto-Submitted: auto-generated List-Id: Documentation project List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/freebsd-doc List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org MIME-Version: 1.0 https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D267428 Graham Perrin changed: What |Removed |Added ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Resolution|DUPLICATE |--- Keywords| |needs-patch, needs-qa Status|Closed |Open --- Comment #3 from Graham Perrin --- On closer inspection, this is not entirely a duplicate.=20 Re , something went wrong between:=20 a) where Acronyms was =E2=80=95 correctly =E2=80=95 a subsection within the= =20 Style Guide section of the Writing Style chapter b) where One sentence per line should have been a subsection, it was=20 added as a section =E2=80=93 I have not yet found the relevant commit. before the migration of doc to Hugo/AsciiDoctor appears to be OK, at a glan= ce. In the current edition of the book, is a section that asks readers to "follow these style conventions." and the= n:=20 * no convention.=20 Acronyms should not be a section, it should be a subsection (a convention);= and so on.=20 is the most recent capture of the chapter. --=20 You are receiving this mail because: You are the assignee for the bug.=