From owner-freebsd-doc Wed May 17 23:52:59 2000 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from tdl.com (pm4-3.tdl.com [206.180.234.3]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D15B137BD32 for ; Wed, 17 May 2000 23:52:55 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from wdr@tdl.com) Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by tdl.com (8.9.3/8.8.8) with ESMTP id XAA01440 for ; Wed, 17 May 2000 23:53:57 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from wdr@tdl.com) Date: Wed, 17 May 2000 23:53:57 -0700 (PDT) From: William Richard X-Sender: wdr@wdr.my.domain To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/18632: Minor grammar nit: internet.html (fwd) Message-ID: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk X-Loop: FreeBSD.org > The FreeBSD development team is as concerned about security as they are > about performance. > > Change "as they are" to "as it is". Might I suggest: "The FreeBSD developers are as concerned about security as they are about performance." Here we have individual developers rather than an impersonal "development team". Just a suggestion. WR -- William Richard BSD Unix Consultant Tel/Fax: 925-480-2319 x1951 E-Mail: wdr@tdl.com To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message