Date: Tue, 20 Apr 2021 12:12:29 -0400 (EDT) From: Chris Hill <chris@monochrome.org> To: Joe Smith <joeinwap@gmail.com> Cc: freebsd-questions@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Typo in asmctl(1) Message-ID: <alpine.BSF.2.20.2104201205540.44891@tripel.monochrome.org> In-Reply-To: <CA%2BPLHcHvrETQwNyC5eoXfQLL%2B%2Bzwu_j12oz0ByeNbbE2cPK8Uw@mail.gmail.com> References: <CA%2BPLHcHvrETQwNyC5eoXfQLL%2B%2Bzwu_j12oz0ByeNbbE2cPK8Uw@mail.gmail.com>
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On Mon, 19 Apr 2021, Joe Smith wrote: > In > https://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=asmctl&sektion=1&apropos=0&manpath=FreeBSD+12.2-RELEASE+and+Ports > it says > > *video* *down* > LCD backlight less dark. > > That should be either "LCD backlight less bright" or "LCD backlight darken". Of those two phrases, the former reads better IMHO. And as long as we're looking at this, I imagine "key down" needs the same change. And REQUIERMENT should be REQUIREMENTS. And the line after, which begins with "following," could benefit from an initial "the." -- Chris Hill chris@monochrome.org
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