From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun May 28 18:34:37 2006 Return-Path: X-Original-To: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Delivered-To: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6F27816B6C7; Sun, 28 May 2006 18:34:37 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (repoman.freebsd.org [216.136.204.115]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E21FE43D79; Sun, 28 May 2006 18:34:35 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.13.6/8.13.6) with ESMTP id k4SIXQrB080388; Sun, 28 May 2006 18:33:26 GMT (envelope-from remko@repoman.freebsd.org) Received: (from remko@localhost) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.13.6/8.13.4/Submit) id k4SIXQ0S080387; Sun, 28 May 2006 18:33:26 GMT (envelope-from remko) Message-Id: <200605281833.k4SIXQ0S080387@repoman.freebsd.org> From: Remko Lodder Date: Sun, 28 May 2006 18:33:25 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org X-FreeBSD-CVS-Branch: HEAD Cc: Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks chapter.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 28 May 2006 18:34:38 -0000 remko 2006-05-28 18:33:25 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks chapter.sgml Log: Update the DVD-RAM section a bit. This avoids the usage of "you", "we" and things like that, which is consistent with the rest of the documention. Also remove a paragraph that mentioned that the upcoming commands should be executed as root, since the prompt should imply that already (like the rest of the handbook has as well). Revision Changes Path 1.259 +9 -12 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml