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Author: imp
Date: Sat Jan 16 00:45:48 2016
New Revision: 294118
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/294118

Log:
  Improve the sentence flow as well which has the happy benefit of
  making read-only modify a noun, a case where it unquestionably should
  be hyphenated.

Modified:
  head/share/man/man4/acpi_panasonic.4

Modified: head/share/man/man4/acpi_panasonic.4
==============================================================================
--- head/share/man/man4/acpi_panasonic.4	Sat Jan 16 00:44:10 2016	(r294117)
+++ head/share/man/man4/acpi_panasonic.4	Sat Jan 16 00:45:48 2016	(r294118)
@@ -142,11 +142,11 @@ The following MIBs are available:
 .Bl -tag -width indent
 .It Va hw.acpi.panasonic.lcd_brightness_max
 The maximum level of brightness.
-The value is read only and
+This read-only value is
 automatically set according to hardware model.
 .It Va hw.acpi.panasonic.lcd_brightness_min
 The minimum level of brightness.
-The value is read only and
+This read-only value is
 automatically set according to hardware model.
 .It Va hw.acpi.panasonic.lcd_brightness
 Current brightness level of the LCD (read-write).