From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Jul 18 15:55:36 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E418D5A7; Thu, 18 Jul 2013 15:55:35 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-3.mit.edu (dmz-mailsec-scanner-3.mit.edu [18.9.25.14]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 662D77EB; Thu, 18 Jul 2013 15:55:35 +0000 (UTC) X-AuditID: 1209190e-b7f988e0000009a7-7f-51e80ec4b16a Received: from mailhub-auth-1.mit.edu ( [18.9.21.35]) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-3.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id 1C.2E.02471.4CE08E15; Thu, 18 Jul 2013 11:50:28 -0400 (EDT) Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (outgoing-auth-1.mit.edu [18.9.28.11]) by mailhub-auth-1.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id r6IFoRUi032463; Thu, 18 Jul 2013 11:50:27 -0400 Received: from multics.mit.edu (system-low-sipb.mit.edu [18.187.2.37]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as kaduk@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.12.4) with ESMTP id r6IFoNba008790 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Thu, 18 Jul 2013 11:50:26 -0400 Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by multics.mit.edu (8.12.9.20060308) id r6IFoNdw005816; Thu, 18 Jul 2013 11:50:23 -0400 (EDT) Date: Thu, 18 Jul 2013 11:50:23 -0400 (EDT) From: Benjamin Kaduk To: Warren Block Subject: Re: svn commit: r42309 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure In-Reply-To: <201307180021.r6I0LcRM094168@svn.freebsd.org> Message-ID: References: <201307180021.r6I0LcRM094168@svn.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Alpine 1.10 (GSO 962 2008-03-14) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII; format=flowed X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFvrEIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUixCmqrHuE70Wgwc61khY/Ph5isrixaD+T xe7+XmaLy+8nsjiweMz4NJ8lgDGKyyYlNSezLLVI3y6BK+PEpwa2gh/cFRcmTmRqYNzP2cXI ySEhYCIxa8IJVghbTOLCvfVsXYxcHEIC+xgl+qa8YYdwNjJKrLmwihHCOcQk0XDjJzOE08Ao 8fnfbTaQfhYBbYkTt7+wg9hsAioSM99sBIuLCKhKfO9exQRiMwtESexZ2gi2T1ggWOLUnQZG EJtTwEri/YkeIJuDg1fAUeL5Ei6QsJCApcTs5xvBykUFdCRW75/CAmLzCghKnJz5hAVipKXE uT/X2SYwCs5CkpqFJLWAkWkVo2xKbpVubmJmTnFqsm5xcmJeXmqRrrFebmaJXmpK6SZGcNBK 8u1g/HpQ6RCjAAejEg/vgy/PA4VYE8uKK3MPMUpyMCmJ8npzvAgU4kvKT6nMSCzOiC8qzUkt PsQowcGsJMK79idQOW9KYmVValE+TEqag0VJnPfZ07OBQgLpiSWp2ampBalFMFkZDg4lCd5D vEBDBYtS01Mr0jJzShDSTBycIMN5gIbfB6nhLS5IzC3OTIfIn2JUlBLn3QCSEABJZJTmwfXC ksorRnGgV4R514FU8QATElz3K6DBTECDLaeCXF1ckoiQkmpgNHP5KyekksfisfXmpWYV/jty u/Z9eDC/677bht0e6z3ulVj+myyuzPaieo/M5D8TsrWdlY5r8HJo+P7fzjRPLndCovPmG003 Izd/mRIsv5Xn4v4Qh0O3YupXTGNt/Mtk/lKx4Hr7FZbY9UxOT4V8km8e53ZUnuxy54L4/x2L P7BWWKz/ZGRlpsRSnJFoqMVcVJwIADnFdFQFAwAA Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 18 Jul 2013 15:55:36 -0000 On Thu, 18 Jul 2013, Warren Block wrote: > Author: wblock > Date: Thu Jul 18 00:21:37 2013 > New Revision: 42309 > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42309 > > Log: > Edit, update, and simplify the structure chapter. > > Reviewed by: bps and Allan Jude on IRC > > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml > ============================================================================== > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml Wed Jul 17 23:27:59 2013 (r42308) > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml Thu Jul 18 00:21:37 2013 (r42309) > - > - This is unfortunate as it makes it impossible to treat > - these as generic XML files and simply convert them to > - HTML, RTF, PS, and other formats in the same way the main > - Handbook is generated. This would > - force you to rebuild the Handbook every time you want to > - see the effect a change has had on just one > - chapter. > + The chapter.xml files are not > + complete XML documents. They cannot be > + individually rendered to output formats, but must be built > + as part of the Handbook. I think "and" is slightly better than "but" as a conjunction, here. There is not really a contrast between the two clauses, they are saying similar/related things. -Ben > > > >