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Date: Fri, 14 Jul 2006 06:13:27 -0400
From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: Re: cvs commit:
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On Thu, 13 Jul 2006 19:49:33 +0000
"Ben Kaduk" <minimarmot@gmail.com> wrote:

> On 7/12/06, Tom Rhodes <trhodes@freebsd.org> wrote:
> > trhodes     2006-07-12 02:18:19 UTC
> >
> >   FreeBSD doc repository
> >
> >   Modified files:
> >     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/kerneldebug
> >                                                           chapter.sgml
> >   Log:
> >   MFp4: Bring the kernel debugging section up to reality.
> >
> >   Requested by:   rwatson
> >
> >   Revision  Changes    Path
> >   1.67      +35 -16    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/kerneldebug/chapter.sgml
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> 
> Hello, Tom,
> 
> I am sorry to be picking nits here, but I think that in this hunk:
> @@ -498,6 +498,7 @@
>      <para>To configure your kernel to include DDB, add the option line
> 
>        <programlisting>options DDB</programlisting>
> +      <programlisting>options KDB</programlisting>
> 
>        to your config file, and rebuild.  (See <ulink
>  	url="&url.books.handbook;/index.html">The FreeBSD Handbook</ulink>
> for details on
> 
> you should be saying "add the option lines" instead of "add the option
> line" -- now, we want the user to add both DDB and KDB, so the plural
> seems appropriate.
> 
> Thanks for adding this update -- I think I missed a couple of the
> changes that went in!

I Ben, thanks for pointing this out to me.  I have fixed this
as well as another issue in my development branch.  It will
be merged into the handbook and appear on the website after
that.

-- 
Tom Rhodes