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On Sat, Apr 29, 2006 at 01:34:03AM +0000, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> trhodes     2006-04-29 01:34:03 UTC
>=20
>   FreeBSD src repository
>=20
>   Modified files:
>     usr.sbin/cached      cached.8=20
>   Log:
>   Follow FreeBSD mdoc(7) conventions:
>   - Remove hard sentence breaks;
>   - Avoid using double negatives or "sexist" language;
>   - Expand contractions;
>   - Remove a blank line;
>   - Some grammar changes.

Nice work, but:

> | -The cache is actually per-user. It means that each user can work only =
with the
> | -cached data, that were cached by him and can't poison the cache of oth=
er users.
> | +The cache is actually per-user.
> | +This means that each user can work only with the
> | +cached data that was cached locally and cannot poison the cache of oth=
er users.

I preferred "that were cached by him" over "that was cached locally".
"Locally" implies "on the same system" to me.  If you want to avoid using
"him", try "themselves".

Ceri
--=20
That must be wonderful!  I don't understand it at all.
                                                  -- Moliere

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