From owner-svn-ports-all@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Mar 22 13:44:43 2015 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-ports-all@freebsd.org Received: by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix, from userid 1033) id 41229F9B; Sun, 22 Mar 2015 13:44:43 +0000 (UTC) Date: Sun, 22 Mar 2015 13:44:43 +0000 From: Alexey Dokuchaev To: Jimmy Olgeni Subject: Re: svn commit: r381910 - in head: deskutils/docear devel/csoap games/xbattle graphics/whirlgif misc/metromap misc/whichman multimedia/smpeg2 net/exabgp net/tableutil sysutils/bontmia sysutils/clonehdd... Message-ID: <20150322134443.GA67200@FreeBSD.org> References: <201503221322.t2MDMrcO094256@svn.freebsd.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <201503221322.t2MDMrcO094256@svn.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.23 (2014-03-12) Cc: svn-ports-head@freebsd.org, svn-ports-all@freebsd.org, ports-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-ports-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18-1 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the ports tree List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 22 Mar 2015 13:44:43 -0000 On Sun, Mar 22, 2015 at 01:22:53PM +0000, Jimmy Olgeni wrote: > New Revision: 381910 > URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/ports/381910 > QAT: https://qat.redports.org/buildarchive/r381910/ > > Log: > Fix minor typos in pkg-descr files. As usual, thanks for doing this Jimmy! Few observations, if you permit: > Modified: head/misc/metromap/pkg-descr > ============================================================================== > --- head/misc/metromap/pkg-descr Sun Mar 22 12:59:46 2015 (r381909) > +++ head/misc/metromap/pkg-descr Sun Mar 22 13:22:52 2015 (r381910) > @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ > -Metromap is a simple pygtk+2 programm for finding pathes in metro(subway) maps. > +Metromap is a simple pygtk+2 program for finding paths in metro(subway) maps. ^ Missing space before opening parenthesis. I suspect there might be few similar mistakes throughout the tree, so they better be fixed together in one go, not on per-port basis. > Maps for Moscow, St. Petersburg, Kiev, London and Berlin are included. ^ Missing comma before "and". While a minor (and arguable) issue, we tend to respect Oxford comma in FreeBSD. > ============================================================================== > --- head/sysutils/clonehdd/pkg-descr Sun Mar 22 12:59:46 2015 (r381909) > +++ head/sysutils/clonehdd/pkg-descr Sun Mar 22 13:22:52 2015 (r381910) > @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ > Tool for copy partitions to another HDD. FreeBSD stores its data on > -partitions, which incapsulated in slices. Soft, such as Partition > +partitions, which encapsulated in slices. Soft, such as Partition > Magic, Acronis, etc. detect only slice, not real partitions on that > -slice. CloneHDD correctly understand size diference between two HDD > +slice. CloneHDD correctly understand size difference between two HDD > and change size of each partition proportionally for filling entire > HDD. Wow, this file definitely abuses whitespace way to much. :) > Modified: head/x11-fonts/croscorefonts-fonts-ttf/pkg-descr > ============================================================================== > --- head/x11-fonts/croscorefonts-fonts-ttf/pkg-descr Sun Mar 22 12:59:46 2015 (r381909) > +++ head/x11-fonts/croscorefonts-fonts-ttf/pkg-descr Sun Mar 22 13:22:52 2015 (r381910) > @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ > Google has created a set of fonts for its ChromeOS Operating system. > > The three standard ones closely mimic the most popular ones for the Windows > -platform and the linuxso-called Liberation fonts but are available under an > +platform and the linux so-called Liberation fonts but are available under an "Linux" should should start with an upper-case letter in this case. Preceding definite article IMHO should be dropped. > Modified: head/x11/stjerm/pkg-descr > ============================================================================== > --- head/x11/stjerm/pkg-descr Sun Mar 22 12:59:46 2015 (r381909) > +++ head/x11/stjerm/pkg-descr Sun Mar 22 13:22:52 2015 (r381910) > @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ > -Stjerm is a quake-like terminal emulator. It's window is shown with a key > +Stjerm is a quake-like terminal emulator. Its window is shown with a key Since "quake" refers to the game here, it should start with an upper-case letter (Quake) as well. ./danfe